Maybe you should ask for your step-brother for help? I hear that in many adult films that is the suggested solution to people getting stuck. /s
I think I got myself unstuck. The problem (obvious in hindsight) is that all of my characters got along way too well. One big happy family. Big mistake! Conflict is fun: https://forum.chyoa.com/threads/conflict-is-fun.6284/
Hoejabi - How My Hajj Turned Me Into A Whore. Devout religious girl too naive for her own good becomes an international pornstar.
Comedy element where each guest adopts a haphazard disguise (angels, shepherds, kings) upon Joseph entering the room
NTRtivity: You play as Mary and cuck Joseph repeatedly and every person that attends the birth thinks they're the father
Rereading + adding more scenes for my submission to be turned into a novel then I see grammar errors I missed before submission. *facepalm*
To be clear, I'm not publishing for awhile it, but I'm getting it ready and I have intentions to make it quite longer than the word count that was the contest. Either way excited to see who won as there were a lot of good entrys ;)
On my latest story, I got 100 likes in the first 6000 views, but only 10 likes in the next 5000 views. I wonder why it drops off so sharply.
Finished my submission earlier this evening. Still in review but had swapped to a new inspired story after not liking my initial draft.
Hijinks. Shenanigans. Tomfoolery. Mischief. Long ago, the 4 nations lived in harmony. Then, everything changed when the Tomfoolery nation attacked.
Only the Scallywag, master of all four elements, could stop them, but when the world needed him most, he skedaddled.
Normally the best thing to do would be to suggest they double penetrate you. But don't vampires already do that what with two sharp fangs? Also, getting sucked off by two people ceases to be sexy when they are just sucking your blood.
Results in. Yet again, the "cry more' crowd is bitching about how offended they are which sort of proves what I said yesterday.
From "Empathy is a sin and weakness that must be eradicated" to "why is everyone being so mean TO MEEEEEEEEEE!!?!!" in less than 60 seconds.
It's always the "people are too offended" guys that bitch and whine about having their feelings hurt more than anyone else I know.
If your "values" are that you should be allowed to be an asshole to other people, but if they don't call you cool, then there needs to be a new special rule so people can't say mean words back to you, it's sure as hell not because you're secretly some kind of ultra tough badass.
Don't worry, it'll be Thanksgiving or Christmas before you know it, and you'll be able to talk to all of them again! That's what you meant, right? Right?
