I've recently wrote a story called "Robo-Slut Actresses" but...

Discussion in 'Authors' Hangout' started by MarvelDCfan0192, Nov 28, 2016.

  1. MarvelDCfan0192

    MarvelDCfan0192 Virgin CHYOA Backer

    I've changed it into a story now called, "Literary Robo-Sluts" and it's about a Robo-Slut company taking female characters from literary stories and turning them into robotic sex dolls at which point a nondescript man named "John Doe" will buy one of these robotic sex dolls for himself. I've wrote two chapters of the story with the literary Heroines that I know. The first one is Katniss Everdeen from the Hunger Games books and the other is Hermione Granger from the Harry Potter books. I went into great detail about explaining their respective personalities so the writer can get it.

    I'm hoping that people will come along and add to my work someday.
     
  2. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    Link? (and are you willing to do an 'art trade'?)
     
  3. MarvelDCfan0192

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    Literary Robo-Sluts — CHYOA


    And yes, I am willing to do an art trade. But the question is how do I do that?
     
  4. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    I add to your story, you add to mine, I add to yours, and so on...
     
  5. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    @~# I was all set to start contributing to your story, when I realized that I didn't know enough about any literary heroine to write one up the way you did! ^_^; I'll get back to you about this once I've read up on someone...
     
  6. MarvelDCfan0192

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    Oh, I would do that but the thing is, I'm not very good at writing sex scenes. I mean, look through my account and read this chapter called "Lois kisses you and then you fuck her." I didn't write an original sex scene for that chapter, instead I sort of copied a particular chapter in another story called "School Daze" but then I also copied from some random chapters in the Smutty Sex Romp story, (which is not on this site) and I re-wrote some things and it all became this mishmash of different story ideas from different sources. In fact, you don't even have to look through my account, I'll link it here for you!

    Lois kisses you and then you fuck her. - Comic Book Robo-Sluts — CHYOA
     
  7. Nemo of Utopia

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  8. MarvelDCfan0192

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    Well, I kinda wished I could've come up with the sex scene on my own but I guess it is a decent sex scene, not perfect by any stretch of the imagination, but it'll do I suppose. Anyway, I mostly have problems with writing about the foreplay. I don't know to make foreplay sound sexy. It's a glaring weakness in my writing.
     
    Last edited: Nov 30, 2016