Basically what do you people want to see with where this story is going? Also do most of you like the short chapters?
It's not bad. I'm not particularly fond of the short chapters (and I mean the <500 word ones, not just ones that are brief but plot-significant) and the occasional mispelling, but for all that it's pretty linear with relatively few choices, I like that the choices go off on their own little paths and loop back - it means there aren't any real dead ends until you run out of material. Gives it a lot more "replay" value than fap'n'forget, and you can always extend it by adding new choices and tying back in to the main line.
Thanks I appreciate the feedback. Replay value is what I'm going for and I'm trying my best to create lots of options that link back up with the main story, a feature that I wish was used more often on this site.
So far I'm enjoying it (even though the path I have chosen through the story is currently a dead end). I don't mind the short chapters. Question: Here will we get the option to not talk to Stacey (and not piss her off)?
Thanks and dont worry I'm steadily adding more to the different options so they end up at the same point with the main story. As for not pissing off Stacey that isnt going to be an option because it teaches players that minus's in the story are sometimes necessary to advance and can even open up opportunities to gain more relationship with other characters. Also shes a bitchy character and no intro choice is gonna change that.
