Story Link: Alternating Wife (currently 12 chapters with a total of about 12,500 words) Hey After finishing the second woman in my story Alternating Wife, I decided to create a story feedback thread to ask you about your opinion. What did you like most? What is your favorite scene? What did you dislike? Do you like the plot? Is it too much or less descriptive? Is there too much or less sex? Do you like the writing style? What would you like to see in the future? The second girl, the "busty brunette", is inspired by a porn actress, though she isn't meant to be an exact copy. Now I wondered if anyone recognized her from the description. So if you know her name, write me a message with her name (only one try per username). If you're the first one who guesses right, I'll write a chapter for a story of your choice (at least 1,000 words).
I liked the story, it seems really interesting. I would love to add to it, maybe you'll see a chapter in a day or two. What I liked most how eveyrthing changhes when his wife changes, so his sister-in.law no longer is and all the photos change. Just a question, so there are seven women she can change into?
No, the wife could be alternated (technically she doesn't change) by any woman and the process (described in the writer guidelines) won't stop until he finds a way to stop it... well... if he wants to find a way to stop it. The cover picture just shows the abstract concept. Both women who appeared in the story so far aren't shown in the cover picture. A woman also can be around for more than one day if the requirement for the next alternation isn't fulfilled (see the writer guidelines).
So unless he fucks her and makes her orgasm, the changed woman will remain, and she can turn into any kind of woman. So, for example, she could become Maria, the character she was roleplaying, a sexy Latina. I see. So freedom on who she transforms into.I like that, lots of freedom for writers.
Spoiler He must be the reason for her orgasm, so it is enough if he makes her cum by licking or fingering. It would even be enough if she just gets off by rubbing her crotch against his thigh, no matter if there is clothing between them or not. It could be a sexy Latina, an Asian girl, a young student... basically every kind of woman, he could have met in his life. (Though a character like Maria — a poor, desperate, illegal immigrant maid — could be somewhat difficult as the protagonist earns enough money that his wife wouldn't have to work for just a few bucks.) In terms of content, sure. I just might be a bit picky about quality, details, logical flaws and reasonable character behavior (besides the alternation, it still takes place in the real world), and might want to edit contributions a little.
