So between writers block, dying tech, and missing production notes it's been years since I published anything. I swear I think I'm more retired than active. But stil the muse lives, sitting on a wall, kicking her feet and throwing me ideas. So I figured I'd toss them all here in the hopes of getting direction, clarifying logistics, determining viability, inspiring others, or just plain advertising their existence to bait others into adding. http://chyoa.com/chapter/The-Eros-Grimoire.322871 The Eros Grimoire Created for Cross C's "Items of Power" This simple idea is a cursed spellbook of a perverted nature finds its way into the hands of an amature film maker and shenanigans ensue. The idea was quick and dirty and only took two days to write, but it proved to me I could still write. The worldbuilding is intentionally pretty vague on this one, more alusions than descriptions. Our hero is highschool everyman Alex Delacroix, who gets the idea to use the book as a prop for his weekend movies. Only while flipping through the pages of unreadable junk does the book reveal the incantantion for a nudity spell which Alex accidentally casts on his mother Sarah who immediately strips down and then takes off for work. The book then reveals a description of the nudity spell effect but not the couterspell forcing Alex to keep the book a while longer. So at this point Alex and I are planning our next steps. I'd hoped to hold off revealing the next bit of twisted magic until after learning the counter for the first to create a complete "set" of Invocation, description, and counter, but it may not be feasible to advance the story that way. Though I'm considering taking this act to school. Maybe a carpool with his friends or ride in on the bus. Anyway, please give me feedback!
Reading stories on different sites over the years and remembering The Black Bible. You can really take over the world with such a book. The Statue of Jocasta by Luka32 with an ancient goddess spreading incest would be a great starting point on moving this story forward. The same concept is there, just a different medium being used (sex goddess to your book idea). Love those taking over the world stories!
So, I really shouldn't be thinking of another story, but the muse is a stone cold bunny bitch. I got a new laptop for the holidays and spent my day doing everything I can't properly do on my tablet, including playing Hypnochanger's Spiral Clicker. The basic plot of that is that you're "gifted" with a magical will draining spiral by an elf named Helen. By clicking the spiral you can gather willpower that can in turn be used to crack into deeper tiers of the various girls minds and affect them allowing for more mind control shenaningans. And apparently Helen tries to trance you every so often for shits and giggles. It's basically your average idle clicker game, only hypno themed. So my first question is, should I contact Hypnochanger for permission or just reference this first thing in the story or even the description? The second is can this actually work as a real world premise, with some natural extrapolation like a real world mechanic to manipulate the spiral or even turning the game itself into a control mechanism or anything in between that I had not yet considered. Anyway, love to hear your ideas.
Depends on what you want to do. If you're inspired by the game but do a completely different story... no. If you use the characters and whatnot... ask. Not sure about that. I don't see much content in the game. You get new outfits for the girls until all of them are naked and then you can summon another girl while resetting all other girls. So the premise of this game (and all games of that kind) seems to be to fill as much time as possible. I don't see how you would do that within a story.
So I've had a few new concepts, and I wanted some feedback. First on the docket is a little techno reality warper tentatively titled "Deus ex Machina" where our protagonist, the hacker Crossfire hacks into a seemingly forgotten yet startlingly well defended corner of the Dark Web. Upon successfully breaching the security he encounters the virtual embodiment of the creation entity, a literal god in the machine. As a reward for their efforts, our hero is given some ability to manipulate reality via technology. Of course, getting all the cookies at once has the potential to drive someone insane, so there would likely be leveled tiers that unlock by proving competence in a number of previous skills. Or just hacking through them. Not like that would ever go wrong. Next up, in the spirit of Goodboy's Cheerleader Destiny, our hero/ine gains ultimate power... but only as long as it fits a certain criteria. It might be a specific fetish, occupation, nationality or concept, but our champion is unstoppable in his own domain. And if can successfully push that criteria onto a victim, they're his as well. The last two involve the same transmission method with notably different results. Namely a biological virus. In one world, a deadly virus decimates the human population. Survivors were found to enhanced beyond the realms of mere mortals, transformed into either the physically perfect Alpha's or the hideously twisted Omega's. Just some superhero fun inspired by George R. R. Martin's Wild Cards novels. A world away a virus strikes with a zero percent fatality rate. But while it didn't kill anyone it's actual purpose was something far more sinister. Everyone exposed to the virus undergoes a change in brain chemistry dividing into those who take commands and those who issue them. So we can see pretty much any blend of M/F D/s you can imagine. So thems my breaks. Let me know if any thing catches your interest and I may try to flesh out the bare bones with more details,
Your Deus Ex Machina storyline sounds pretty cool. It could allows for some great world building to complement whatever sexual stuff one can come up with. Everything from a lecturer using technology to present to a crowd, to a CEO using their private terminal, to a detective working a case with some high tech HUD or a robot partner. And the increasing power/insanity of the machine God sounds very interesting too. Hopefully you'll cook up something with one of your ideas!