Hello, I'm the author of that story, and I'm wondering what people would like to see from it. The main plot is that Iris Greene, a college student, decides she wants to find a man who loves her. All her romance options are older, professional, men, and I am hoping to spend at least a few pages each getting their personalities discovered and their stories advanced before jumping into the sex scenes. What kind of story turns would you all be interested in, or do you have any suggestions or ways I can improve what I've got so far?
