Hi! I'm currently in the brainstorming, well now, writing about, about two strories that I want to post, but I want to know your opinions on them and how to improve them. Strip Dice Nothing fancy. It's a 1st person story. You play as male character a strip dice game against different female opponents. Right there starts what I didn't figure it out yet. What do you think, for example, about the following characters: a friend's girlfriend, the waitress, etc. Should I be more creative with the opponents? Also, inside the game I'm planning an All Stars Strip Dice with celebrities. ENF of a MILF My more ambitious story, as I want to do something interesting with this setting, that I think it's kind of unique, as most of ENF stories are based on women of 18 to 30 years old. Judy Banks is a divorced mother of two, Adam (19 years old) and Amy (18 years old), who kinda lost all excitement in her life after she finished university. The story will involve her dealing with different ENF situations, like losing her bikini at the public pool. I want to know your opinion on the story idea, and how to improve it.
If you can think up a plausible scenario, I'd love to see a combination of the two. Maybe Adam and Amy get in trouble (dealing pot?) and owe money to a dealer; the dealer leans on mom (Judy). He's an understanding guy, so he offers her a way out...game of Strip Dice. If she can get through without losing all her clothes, he'll void her kids' debt. If not...
I have to say that both of these ideas seem based off one particular thing, and the big issue is how to come about that. For your Dice Story, If you're looking to code, I could see it being very popular, if you added actual game mode elements to it. However, you need a lot more to go on with your characters to make them interesting. Simply marking it as a celebrity might work for people who desperately want that person, but for a lot of readers, they're going to want to know more than just a picture and "THis is who you strip!" As far as the ENF scenario, it's not really my genre, but you have a bit more character going on here, so I'm more interested. From what I understand of the Genre, humiliation or need to be NOT seen naked is a major part of the fetish, and build up. (If I'm wrong on this, feel free to correct me, fans of the Genre. As I said, not my cuppa, so I freely bow to the wisdom of the board on this one.) As a result, with a mother of two legal kids there's of course several ways you can take it... if she's a domineering mother, her trying to get into the house while her happily taking revenge daughter dangles the key behind glass might work, and that's just one off the top of my head. Stories are a lot of work, even the simplest idea I find can balloon exponentially if it takes off, so be sure that what you're writing is what you want to read more than anything else.
For ENF of a MILF. The neighborhood women could be jealous of how hot she is, or her daughter's friends or rival try to prank her daughter by sabotaging her clothes, but either they get the mom's clothes by mistake or the mom and daughter are the same size and the mom borrows the clothes, or the son's friends all have huge crushes on the mom, and they want to see her in the all together and find ways to make it happen publicly.
Game modes elements? How? I understand the celebrity thing that you said, it's just an idea that I've to work more on. I'm not sure to understand you here: "As a result, with a mother of two legal kids there's of course several ways you can take it... if she's a domineering mother, her trying to get into the house while her happily taking revenge daughter dangles the key behind glass might work, and that's just one off the top of my head"
Essentially a revenge scenario. If it doesn't work, it doesn't work. And the game mode is the code that people use on CHYOA to create some of those variable games. If I'm speaking complete gibberish, you don't know what i'm talking about, so don't worry about it.
