At the Cabin

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by johnhoftb, Sep 20, 2014.

  1. Duskford

    Duskford CHYOA Guru

    Gregory and Monica.
     
  2. Cretan_Bull14

    Cretan_Bull14 Really Experienced

    I just have to thank Zack and Victoria (and therefore Duskford) for getting me into reading mystery novels. Read Hammett's "The Maltese Falcon" last year, Conan Doyle and Poe over the winter, and just started my third Agatha Christie novel (second Poirot story) of the summer.
     
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  3. Duskford

    Duskford CHYOA Guru

    That's amazing, glad they could get you into these kinds of stories!
     
  4. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

    I recommend Raymond Chandler's stories of the detective Philip Marlowe.
     
  5. altaccount72

    altaccount72 Virgin

    Do you guys have a favorite thread/scene in the story?
     
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  6. Duskford

    Duskford CHYOA Guru

    There's so many I wouldn't even know where to begin. I'll mention a few that other authors have posted:

    - boomer97 wrote a lot of scenes I liked, such as the Brandon/Heather scene on the game room, the Brandon/Ashley/Vicky threesome and the Brandon/Hannah/Heather/Taylor foursome.
    - Zingiber wrote a really good Taylor/Hannah/Heather threesome that ended spanning a lot of different branches in which Zingiber, Yarkoz, Patzo and I have collaborated.
    - The erotophillia thread written by Yarkoz.
    - Cretan_Bull14 has a really good Zack/Heather storyline going on, and a Zack/Victoria one as well.
    - JohnLocke4 recently submitted an interesting storyline too.
    - adam17017 has a good Zack/Heather story nowadays.

    There are others, of course, lol. If I had to mention all the ones I liked, we'd be here for at least a couple more days.
     
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  7. Cretan_Bull14

    Cretan_Bull14 Really Experienced

    Merry Christmas to all of you!
     
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  8. DarkFriday1408

    DarkFriday1408 Experienced CHYOA Backer

    Merry Christmas!
     
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  9. Yarkoz

    Yarkoz Really Really Experienced

    Hey guys what's happening
     
  10. Duskford

    Duskford CHYOA Guru

    Hey, Yarkoz, how's it going? In here we're just keeping the Cabin flag flying high as always, lol.
     
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  11. DarkFriday1408

    DarkFriday1408 Experienced CHYOA Backer

    Busy with work and with reading what people are posting :)

    What about you?
     
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  12. altaccount72

    altaccount72 Virgin

    Hey I'm having trouble finding a certain story thread, it's one with Chloe fucking her soccer coach and Kurt overheard them.
     
  13. Duskford

    Duskford CHYOA Guru

    altaccount72, sorry for not responding to this sooner, I just saw your question. I think you're referring to boomer97's thread, it's not online anymore because he asked me to delete it.

    Anyways, we should try to revive this forum thread, guys. With many different threads going on, it'd be useful to have a common place to discuss it.
     
  14. Geromichi

    Geromichi Virgin

    I've been on the fence about picking up the thread I was working on, I think it was spin the bottle with dares, it's a bit intimidating picking up something after so long.

    Also there was one scene where Chloe's working a gloryhole, and I'd love to see someone branch it off where instead of Taylor pulling her out, for some reason or another she has to go in and help Chloe finish what she started even if it was just a one off.
     
  15. JoeSte91

    JoeSte91 Virgin

    I believe you're thinking of JohnLocke's thread, but he isn't around anymore, so someone else would have to continue it.

    It'd be great to see this thread get more use again. Not just for the readers to have a singular place to discuss the story, but also for writers. When I just started my branch and was still developing a lot of the story, I read this thread from top to bottom and it was the discourse between guys like Patzo, Yarkoz, johnhoftb and Duskford that prompted me to put Hannah in the sympathetic villain role she occupied in the early part. So, I owe a lot of thanks to this thread and all of you guys.
     
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  16. altaccount72

    altaccount72 Virgin

    ah dang that was one of my favorite threads
     
  17. Duskford

    Duskford CHYOA Guru

    Yeah, it was one of John's, the idea of Taylor helping Chloe is amazing.

    The discussions about the characters were really fun for me, now that there are more characters and the older ones developed a bit since then, it'd be great to have those talks again.
     
  18. quillbot

    quillbot Virgin

    I hope you to pick it back up, Geromichi. You had some fun and hot chapters going on there. I would love to see what chaos might happen next.
     
  19. Duskford

    Duskford CHYOA Guru

    Would be great to see it continued, the spot you stopped with Brandon having Taylor and Ashley getting double-teamed was very interesting!
     
  20. RoyalWasp

    RoyalWasp Virgin

    Hey I need some help finding a thread that may have been deleted. It the one where the final chapter is set 10 years in the future where Chole has turned into a porn star.