Ria's Racial Wreckoning

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Spoox, Jan 18, 2021.

  1. Spoox

    Spoox Guest

    Hi,


    Do you enjoy writing humiliation? Find writing and reading race-driven erotica interesting?


    I know it's not for everyone but I'm looking for writers to bring their expertise to my growing story.


    The premise.

    Ria is British Asian and a rising star at a multinational company. She hates injustice in all forms, fighting it wherever she finds it. Unbeknown to Ria, she is the obsession of Clarke Carlise who is the twisted billionaire owner of the company she works for. At an award ceremony, Ria publicly rebukes Clarke's advances, claiming they are highly inappropriate and desperate. Clarke feels humiliated and belittled. Scorned, Clarke makes it his mission to destroy Ria's confidence and career by blackmailing her into a sordid contract

    Ria's Racial Wreckoning
    https://chyoa.com/story/Ria's-Racial-Wreckoning.33042

    Check it out and let me know what you think.

    Thank you.
     
  2. Spoox

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  3. Spoox

    Spoox Guest

    There have been a number of substantial chapters dropped recently. Not just by me.However, I must admit that I am kind of disappointed no one has responded to this thread.

    I'm here looking for interaction and support.

    If you're shy you can drop me a private message.
     
  4. Thorn_

    Thorn_ CHYOA Guru

    Well, despite popular belief, I’m really not much of a writer, so can’t help you with any contributions, I’m afraid. And as much as I enjoy asian girls, that set up sounds like a highly specific scenario that doesn’t even overall appeal to me that much, personally, admittedly.

    Looking at the summary pitch to pull in authors here, it already gives me the impression, and I could be wrong, but we have a preset named character, named male lead whose personality is already decided as well as what their goals are and the end goal is...so what’s left for other authors to contribute when so much of it is already set in stone and predetermined for them to use? Then there’s nothing to add or contribute. It’s all set up to follow a certain path and go exactly a certain way with highly specific characters.

    Usually, people take a lack of author contributions as a lack of interest or unwillingness in their stories, but also when you have a highly specific scenario and set up that can throw people a little off since YOU know what you want and how things should go, and it makes them wary of how they’d even contribute to that. You know what you want for a story and exactly the way you want it to go. Other authors do not.

    I’m not saying it to insult you. I’m saying it as possible reasons some might be turned off from giving things a serious or proper look when they feel like they’d have nothing to add or work with when it’s all already preengineered.

    I’m pretty confident that I can say that the forum community is always rooting for people’s success though. Hope it works out for you, anyway.
     
    Last edited: Feb 22, 2021
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  5. Spoox

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    Firstly thanks for the well meaning and thorough reply. I appreciate it.

    I can understand why that may be the case. It does make a lot of sense. However, I'm actually very easy to work with. As long as the contribution is well written and fits within the themes already set, I'm cool with it. For example I don't believe I have ever rejected a piece, even badly written ones I have simply reworked them with the author or just by myself before posting.
     
  6. Spoox

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    I hope you do Remysloane. I think I've messaged you a few months ago to tell you I enjoyed your story about the Indian girl, and that you're a great writer.

    I would be honoured to have Remy chapter.b
     
  7. Spoox

    Spoox Guest