Recent content by Beeble42

The Hellfire Club has opened, although the next chapter has the real action. At the moment I have an eye infection affecting both eyes which makes it impractical to write - hence the slow release of chapters because I do not want to catch myself up.

Today's chapter features the hottest girl in the whole tale, the submissive Arabella Skipton, who will make several more appearances and will of course be used by Hannah and the Viscount. And the 2 sisters from the coffee shop take a break from being lady's maids to return to their original...

I had to look it up on Wikipedia and it says Ghost Dog mentions it. I see it's a bit more than the money swap in "Jackie Brown". I think my story is complicated enough. If I message you about the problem (not so much a problem as a decision of which way to go) it will give the plot away...

I have often heard about the difficult middle part of a novel and I think that's the trouble. I really did not know how far to go at the end of Book 3 with Abigail losing her virginity and held back for a long time, but writing about Priscilla aboard ship was really difficult - thank goodness...

As well as publishing one of my favourite chapters today in which we see what a naughty girl Hannah is, I have just finished a 1500 word chapter which I found the most enjoyable I have written for a long time. It features the Bey of Tunis unwrapping his present as a result of strip backgammon...

Chapter 30 which I have just published marks the appearance of the third of the wicked characters. Thomas, Hannah and Thirsky (except he must be bending his knees because he's a couple of inches taller than Thomas) It is probably a deficiency of the story that Sir Thomas himself, although he...

Not many comments so far ... but only 100 chapters left LOL.

I realise it seems slow in terms of the sex but there are at least 5 chapters in Part 1 with sex including an orgy so bear with me. When we get to Part 3 there's a lot of it.

Thank you Friedman

This is definitely over ambitious but I wanted to write an original story set at the end end of the 18th century when clothes were fairly simple so none of that whole Victorian palava of taking half an hour to dress/undress. It is going to be well over 100 chapters and is here...

In my story The Trials of Priscilla and Abigail Hawksby – A Gothic Adventure I added a chapter A Wooden Education to https://chyoa.com/chapter/Pain-and-Pleasure.248207 but after saving it, it appears to have duplicated so there are now 8 copies. Like 'Highlander', there should be only one...

Actually I'm afraid it is. The sun being lower in the sky means that the UV spends longer travelling through the atmosphere so by the time it reaches the ground it is less effective. Yes I was maybe hoping there was a way around this but the Bay of Biscay just isn't far enough south to get over...

:):):) They are finally synched. Thanks Friedman.