Recent content by cottoneye

So I had an idea for a self-indulgent, semi-autobiographical story...but I'm worried that it would be in poor taste, or at least a bad fit for this site. OK, real talk. I got out of an abusive household last year. I'm safe and OK now. But I obviously have a lot of complicated feelings about...

Whole bunch of new chapters. I've spent a while hanging out on the Unending BE Addventure, and all this stuff was originally published there. Full credit for the "More Spirit" chapter goes to the talented ajc. You can find the original here...

Ugh, I'm so sorry it took this long for me to respond. @Zeebop thank you so much for your feedback! Yeah, repetition and knowing when and when not to go for minimalism are recurring problems of mine. And while I'm glad I tried something new with the Lizard Lesbian thread, I can't say I'd do...

Hello everyone! I feel like I spend too much time thinking of ways to improve my writing, and asking for feedback seems like the most straightforward solution. Here's some links to what I've been doing: Control All Monster Girls Thanos' Infinity Orgy Pay No Attention To The Me Behind The...

Two new chapters. Bee-Girl's meant to be a worldbuilding chapter that can branch off in a bunch of directions. I thought using mind control to give a mind to someone without one would be a unique twist. Meanwhile, Medusa's more of a traditional hypnosis snippet, albeit in a weird, Pokemon-y...

I don't have an in-depth critique for you right now, but I just wanted to say that you are very good at the "people try to make sense of bizarre situations" school of dialogue.

So this took off way more than I thought it would and I want to make sure I'm not churning out crap. Control All Monster Girls A porn parody of the Middle-Earth: Shadow Games, though it doesn't have much in common with the work of Tolkien or WB Games beyond the general premise of "warrior and...