Recent content by Lookingforthis

Well, there you go: The Generational Incest path. Honestly, there are a couple of ways this could have gone. My original plan was to have Jason meekly accepted due to his attraction to his mother and the idea keeping him from saying no. But after having written the other option path, I am...

Yeah a little bit a late I know, but I am declaring the poll to be over. And the winner is: 2) Finishing the other white branch with 11 votes. A reminder; This doesn't mean that the other stuff in the vote aren't going to happen. It just means that they aren't going to happen next.

Righto, penetration and impregnation in one chapter. And in the same amount of chapters as the Black route too. I am thinking about doing a Yellow route now, this time an action one rather then the dramatic or comedic Black and White routes respectively. Or I could continue the Black route...

The last bit of the White route has been posted and I could honestly go either way here as well. Well, actually, I am definitely going to have them fuck as I feel that I've build up the sexual tension enough for that, but I could justify not doing it too. Mind, even if I didn't, it would...

Well, updating this to see if it hits anyone who was watching. Released two chapters and the third this week will be determined by a poll. Basically, the choice comes between continuing this new family "tradition" and giving the MC's mother away to his child when he happens to come of age or...

No, no, no, I wouldn't have considered adding more people if you hadn't suggested it. See, it seems obvious given how harems are so popular, but I tend to monofocus on my ideas so I tend to miss the obvious.

Thank you! I am actually a bit illiterate when it comes to coding, so I didn't even know that I had game mode enabled. I'll try to keep that in mind in the future. There is one point in the Black storyline before they fucked where we could have another meaningful option happen, and that's at...

Better late then never. Newest chapter is out. If any of you are so inclined, tell me what you think.

The newest branch, white is now here aaaaaaand...I am not that happy with it. This was always planned as a lighter much more fun take on this whole premise to be honest, but I wasn't feeling it as I wrote. Nonetheless, muse or no, I promised myself that I would write something tonight and so I...

Well, I'll admit it comes mostly in the "posting 1-2 sentence responses". I guess my experience with those have colored my biases >_>

Just wanted to say that I, well, disagree with this. IMHO. using clinical words is important for two reasons; Building emotional distance and providing a low bar to build up from. You may want to build emotional distance if, say, the genitals aren't what you want the audience to be...

Alright guys, the latest branch of the "Black" storyline is here. If anyone has an idea to resolve this situation, such as it is, please feel free to let me know. I roughly know where I want to take this story but the falling action of the beginning arc is something I am still not concrete on...

Alright, for anybody who is following the story here, and is not an american or interested in American football in general, here is the context behind the "He Crumbles like the Cleveland Browns" joke. BEHOLD: TLDR? The Cleveland Browns are not only the worst team in American football...

First up, thank you for the analysis! Should I be giving the character of the father that much exposure though? Like, he is not going to appear in the story ever again but I suppose there is something to be said about giving the reader a bigger emotional attachment to him. Hmmmmmmm...

If someone could give me some constructive criticism I'd appreciate it. See, among other things, I am pretty sure I am not using the CYOA medium properly as I should, but I figure I'd at least get to the smut before I started making branches to the "Black" story line, if only to give that...