Recent content by Sodommelier

There is quite a wealth of knowledge on their site. Thanks for bringing it to my attention!

I agree, breaking up the content would probably be a good idea. A wall of text can look rather daunting in any format. Thank you for the advice.

I didn't even realize how little I referenced the character's name, that should be an easy improvement. All your critiques make sense. I'll make the appropriate edits where I can. Thank you for taking the time to really dive into this. I appreciate your vote of confidence, but unfortunately...

Thank you for the welcoming response and for the tips. I use the free version of Grammarly and it is pretty awesome. It haven’t tried any of the sentence scanning techniques you mentioned, but the logic is sound. I’ll definitely be adding that and ‘the editing with a different intention’ trick...

Thank you for the praise, and thank you for taking the time to read the story. I’d to love to hear any criticisms you have. I’m not expecting perfection, but sometimes I feel like my writing can be a little convoluted, and I don’t want to bore or confuse people. I’ll definitely familiarize...

Hello CHYOA community, I’ve been casually writing erotica for roughly a year now (mostly on reddit). I’m not the most prolific writer, but I was hoping to expand on some of my ideas and themes from my previous work, so I could potentially post something here. I guess I'm looking for advice to...