Here is my first chapter for scrutinizing, any and all feedback is welcome.
Jane was exiting her taxi, returning home from dinner with friends at Black Ubu's, New York's hottest new restaurant to open this month, when she was assaulted by a cacophony of loud cheering, moaning and grunting. A...
Hi there.
I've contributed a small number of branches to other peoples stories in the past and after a bit of a hiatus I've got the bug to start writing again.
My idea is more of a compilation of stories based around a reality warping/altering website that people can use once to live out a...