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    Fictional Nudist Fantasy

    https://chyoa.com/story/Fictional-Nudist-Fantasy.67578 Okay, this is my third published story. With this story, I'm just coming up with different ways to turn my favorite characters into nudists. Still, I would appreciate any feedback about my writing.
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    Lesbian Amazon Babe (and some other ideas)

    Heyo, I know it's been a month since you replied, but I wanted to say thanks for the feedback. It's got my gears turning a bit. That's a cool tidbit I didn't know before. Thanks for that. After I first posted this, I thought about changing the name, but now, I have a different idea. Why not...
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    Clash of the Elseworlds

    Heyo, so late last year, I started Clash of the Elseworlds: https://chyoa.com/story/Clash-of-The-Elseworlds.57837 , with another author. It's basically fanfiction with one thread being the main focus. Since I'm a newbie writer, I would appreciate any feedback on the writing in my chapters.
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    Lesbian Amazon Babe (and some other ideas)

    Thanks, I’ll keep this in mind. Funny thing, though, I pulled the name Doris from a historical list of names for the actual Amazons. I will try a different name, maybe.
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    Lesbian Amazon Babe (and some other ideas)

    Hello, looking for some feedback on a story idea I got over the weekend: Nicole works as an assistant to nerdy scientist Brian for a revolutionary experiment: creating a gateway to another dimension. Brian unfortunately decides to use it to achieve his life-long dream of having a hot warrior...
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    Naming Fantasy Worlds

    Okay, so I've been brainstorming some fantasy settings to use in my next story, one of which I've been doing so for about five years now. However, I realize that I'm not really the best at naming fictional places. So far, I've been using Google Translate and name generators to get by. So, I'm...
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    Idea for "Living Vagina" Story

    Well, I feel "getting through daily life with my talking vagina" would be what I'm going for. You are right that I need to think up a basic plot, since I failed to do that with my last story. The first two don't sound too bad. The first is the closest to what I had in mind. That last example...
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    Idea for "Living Vagina" Story

    Lately, I've been following this story "Too Good For Too Long" (https://chyoa.com/story/Too-Good-For-Too-Long.44025) and while the whole "swapping the pussy and the mouth" isn't exactly my thing, I am fascinated by the first few chapters where the aliens mistakenly treat the FL's vagina as a...
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    Best Way to Revamp a Story (and a few other things)

    About two years ago, I joined up and started a story of my own about women who are transported butt naked into parallel worlds: https://chyoa.com/story/Naked-Girls-In-Other-Worlds.29524 Unfortunately, due to IRL and my admittingly short attention span, I didn't get that far into it. Now, I'm...
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