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Yeah definitely. Do you think describing something like that in more vivid detail, like for example: “Character X was lying in the mud. Blood was gushing out of the slit in his helmet and the place where his gorget met his breastplate. After Character Z removed his helmet and saw something...

Thank you :) I just wonder if there is any sort of line when it comes to gore. If I write that a character gets stabbed through the neck and chokes to death on his own blood, is that already too far? I’d love it if there was a way to write know where exactly that line is…and I really don’t want...

Like I said, I already read the guide but I’m still not quite clear on how those rules would affect my plans…

Hi there, This is a general question regarding writing about violence. I just read the rules about violence, but I’m still not clear if what I’m planning to do in a story I’m currently outlining would fall into the forbidden category. I’m currently sketching out a medieval fantasy story and...

Hey there y’all! I’ve been getting back into CHYOA lately and have been writing more actively again. I was wondering if there were any newer stories and smaller writers that have recently caught your eye. I’ve been finding myself going back to all my old favourites and not really loving the...

Hey there everyone, I’ve recently gotten back into writing again, after life got in the way for a while (as many of us have repeatedly). Over the many times that this has happened to me, I find that both being away from the material for a while, as well as just being a different person and a...

I feel you, especially on Living In Your Sister‘s Shadow. At least that one has somewhat of an ending. Could’ve definitely used a few chapters to wrap every one of the endings up properly, even if just with a time jump and conclusion.

For a project of that size, you should be.

High praise coming from you. I’ll be sure to check it out!

We’ve all been there. We’re reading a great story, we’re getting invested and are livening everything about it and then suddenly, we unceremoniously reach the point where the author for some reason or another just didn’t continue writing. There have been threads on here about exactly those...

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