And when it came out, it went, drip-drip-drip I didn't know she had the G.I. Joe kung-fu grip
Cleaned up a few typos. I think the parallel-track construction is confusing to a lot of people. (It makes sense to me, but I'm insane.)
Well, there is the fact that it's a bit slower-paced in that I don't have her one her knees sucking a random cock within five chapters.
I think it's this branch: https://chyoa.com/chapter/High-School-Graduate-Chase-Wallin---Transformative-Sodas---Just-Fooling-Around.1376056
Calling it at three parts, because this week coming up is busy as hell. But might revisit a longer branch at some point....
Part 2! https://chyoa.com/chapter/Rowana-%26-Azzie-Read-%22The-AI-Knows%22-by-Outa%2C-Part-2.1714664
I've been meaning to do another Masochist Mode review. https://chyoa.com/chapter/Rowana-%26-Azzie-Read-%22The-AI-Knows%22-by-Outa%2C-Part-1.1714176
So the plan at the moment is to do two parallel-path chapters for each main path chapter until we catch up, then we'll alternate one-for-one. I'm...
Yeah, I'm at that weird point of "glad this isn't getting too popular because there are already a lot of chapters to write" and yet painfully...
"Your creampie lacks emotion. Intensity. Where is the love?"
It is very difficult to try to write a loving, therapeutic MFF threesome.
I don't get a lot of feedback on the sexy scenes, so I have no idea how I'm doing. Some of them are definitely more mechanical and perfunctory...
If nothing else, this story gives me an excuse to do more brainstorming on setting, which is fun.
Not sure what the end game for DOOMED is; there isn't even a thousand chapters yet and quite a bit more to write. I have vague ideas that maybe...
Slowly getting back on track. More plot incoming! More sex! I know the lack of sex in the chapters compared to the more porn-y stories is a...
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