More plot, less sex. I don't know if the balance of plot/lore/sex is off on this or just me. First time trying to do several parallel intersecting...
Am I missing any masochist mode stories at this point? Think I got to them all.
Still working on this story, although the low engagement has me dying a little inside.
And when it came out, it went, drip-drip-drip I didn't know she had the G.I. Joe kung-fu grip
Cleaned up a few typos. I think the parallel-track construction is confusing to a lot of people. (It makes sense to me, but I'm insane.)
Well, there is the fact that it's a bit slower-paced in that I don't have her one her knees sucking a random cock within five chapters.
I think it's this branch: https://chyoa.com/chapter/High-School-Graduate-Chase-Wallin---Transformative-Sodas---Just-Fooling-Around.1376056
Calling it at three parts, because this week coming up is busy as hell. But might revisit a longer branch at some point....
Part 2! https://chyoa.com/chapter/Rowana-%26-Azzie-Read-%22The-AI-Knows%22-by-Outa%2C-Part-2.1714664
I've been meaning to do another Masochist Mode review. https://chyoa.com/chapter/Rowana-%26-Azzie-Read-%22The-AI-Knows%22-by-Outa%2C-Part-1.1714176
So the plan at the moment is to do two parallel-path chapters for each main path chapter until we catch up, then we'll alternate one-for-one. I'm...
Yeah, I'm at that weird point of "glad this isn't getting too popular because there are already a lot of chapters to write" and yet painfully...
"Your creampie lacks emotion. Intensity. Where is the love?"
It is very difficult to try to write a loving, therapeutic MFF threesome.
I don't get a lot of feedback on the sexy scenes, so I have no idea how I'm doing. Some of them are definitely more mechanical and perfunctory...
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