Just published Ye Olde Ren Faire. Please post any feedback or comments here. It's just started so suggestions and contributions are appreciated as I start writing. Current Story Branches Together Gown/Corset Shopping Kat turned into buxom maiden. Sheriff Nisha arrests Rich Escape Cleavage day! Rich turned into Regina Lover's Glade Suggestions: Finished: "No, Kat is being Odd" Finished: "Cleavage Day!"
Just finished reading the opening chapters. Nice start that got me curious where the story might go. Not much else to say for now.
Finished and liked what I've read so far(4 chapters to date).Enjoying the slow build-up as I posted and can hardly wait for the main scenario to begin
Thank you guys for enjoying it so far. I'm aiming to hammer out some more tomorrow. A question I have is should I use photos for the costumes? Finding pictures of Ren Faire garb is easy. The trouble is finding sexy gowns so far.
Not a huge fan of photos myself but if you believe it will enhance the storytelling better than descriptive word then go picture crazy!
Kat's Sexy Red Gown, Story Branch finished: Rich has a plan I will be adding dead end chapters to each of the branches with one "Good" ending. After this I will be expanding upon the Lover's Glade story arc which will involve transformation into Nymph and Satyr as well as a love spell havok. I don't see this arc lasting as long as te initial one so I may branch out into a Belly Dancer arc. Please like and book mark chapters. That tells me that there is interest. Also keep requests coming as they really help get my creative juices flowing. Any contributions are welcomed as well.
Shout out to Noah_Peal for pointing out my mistakes in Chapter 1. The names for the main characters have been corrected to match the rest of the story.
I'm calling out for more contributions. I won't be able to add any more chapters till 10/10/16. I will be able to review additional chapters once a day.
