This should be a fun story. Let me know if any of you think of a way to make it more fun. Or don't let me know, and just write it in.
You know, for the dark elf city, you could have the protagonist be a rather prudish person, who is initially wildly out of place there, but slowly embraces the city's hedonistic tendencies. Or, alternatively, you could do the reverse with the divine city. Have a wild sex-fiend protagonist slowly corrupt the city of the gods into a wretched hive of scum and villainy. I like what you have got so far, I am exited for more.
I hadn't thought of that angle for the Dark Elf city. Makes a lot of sense, I like it. I definitely was thinking of having a wild dude corrupting the divine city though I should also note that this is an open story. In fact... if this story is going to progress rapidly, it depends on other users continuing it and adding their own twist. Often I burn out on projects early, or get discouraged when I don't complete my goals to other's or my own satisfaction in a timely manner. I don't plan on making CHYOA a site where that happens, and to that end I plan on going my own pace, as inspiration hits me. In time, like maybe even years, I hope that this story will get fleshed out with or without other users. But if people like the premise, get inspired by a location or a character, and want things to happen faster, they will just have to do that part themselves. Since this is a thread for discussing the story, I would also like to mention (if it wasn't obvious) that in many ways this story has a kind of reality-alter theme where the protagonist can do whatever they wish, the twist on that being that they are simply so powerful no one can possibly stop them (with possible rare written-in exceptions) from carrying out their wishes. Like 'Might makes right' times a thousand, but with hopefully enough social structure and ineffectual pushback to make it interesting.
