The Burning of Prosperia

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Ebanu8, Dec 27, 2021.

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  1. Ebanu8

    Ebanu8 Virgin

    So this is a story that was created last year but was pretty much abandoned until I picked it up, with permission from @Warden-Yarn15 who is the original author himself.

    If you guys have any feedback or suggestions to make, don't hesitate to post here. If you want any further clarifications or ask any other questions, PM me and I'll reply as soon as I can.

    Link to the story is here: The Burning of Prosperia
     
    Ebanu8, Dec 27, 2021
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  2. Iam_DickMan

    Iam_DickMan Really Experienced CHYOA Backer

    So I added two chapters. If it is something you want me to continue I’ll keep on it.
     
    Iam_DickMan, Dec 27, 2021
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  3. Ebanu8

    Ebanu8 Virgin

    Do please continue, I'm curious to see what thread you write, and I do appreciate more content being added.
     
    Ebanu8, Dec 28, 2021
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  4. Iam_DickMan

    Iam_DickMan Really Experienced CHYOA Backer

    I’m always willing to take more feedback. I just published the third chapter so let me know what you think.
     
    Iam_DickMan, Dec 28, 2021
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  5. Iam_DickMan

    Iam_DickMan Really Experienced CHYOA Backer

    I don’t know if you are still looking on here but I added another chapter recently, let me know what you think!
     
    Iam_DickMan, Jul 1, 2022
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  6. Ebanu8

    Ebanu8 Virgin

    Yup, I read the new chapter. Quite spicy.
     
    Ebanu8, Jul 1, 2022
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