Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

Got it. Added you to the backlog

 

Featuring the most bizarre thing to ever be sexualized

https://chyoa.com/chapter/Advanced-Fantasy-by-Iam_DickMan.1174498

 

I feel like I wrote a chapter in one of my stories where someone fucks someone's eyehole, but for the life of me I can't find it. I realize that's not the same thing as fucking a sentient eyeball, but still.

 

I mean, Lois Lane gets brainfucked at least once in my story. I'm vaguely offended. Dammit, I need to make the next story fucking weird.

 

How dare you correctly identify every criticism I have about my own writing? You are so accurate it’s scary good. You can even pinpoint when I realized that I painted myself into a corner with a Mary Sue plot macguffin. Aw well, I wrote what got me hard, you read my username. Sign me up for more abuse.

 

Jesus fucking christ, engin.

But if it's not a giant floating eyeball doing it what is even the point?

Ha! Guess that what doing this for years does to you, lol

So, I take it you want me to put you up for Masochist Mode? Got it.

Incidentally, as always we have lots of applicants there, so feel free to do some reviewing of your own

 

At least that's one thing I probably have on lock... I'm probably the most gruesome of the writers they've read >.>

 

Well, there was that one snuff scene with the cum balloon...

 

Fair enough. I'm sure I have that beat somewhere though.

 

I hope that it was actually enjoyable at least? And yeah, I’ll take a whack at a review, I wonder which characters should be reading that smut?

 

I'm afraid I can't disclose my own feelings, but it is usually somewhere in the ballpark of what Marcie says.


Idealy you get two who can play off each other, which can be surprisingly difficult.

 

I don't think you hit any of my gruesome monster sex scenes. Well, maybe that one with the Green Lantern.

Anyway, I need to start looking at doing some more Masochist Mode reviews...

 

I mean at the end of the day the rules should keep the real sick shit out of here anyways.

And while it didn't get a huge response last time, I probably going to implement the "gotta do one review before applicable for masochist mode" rule I teased a while back.

We have way too many masochists and not enough sadists here.

 

This one just ballooned, at least I cut out the skinwalker tangent.


https://chyoa.com/chapter/Gates-of-Genesis-by-DKRouga.1177806

 

Hello! I'd like to invite Marcie and Gina to head on through the narrow caves in Cavern of Lust that I started seven years ago, then stopped around 2019. Some crushing feedback would be good for the two-year-old rewrite I have sitting in my rotting unpublished stories.

 

Hah, got it.

 

Finally got around to doing another Masochist Mode review:

https://chyoa.com/chapter/Lois-Lane-&-Blaze-Read-"After-party-wrestling"-by-unknown156.1180489

 

Hey if you're still doing these I'd love to troll Marcie and Gina with one of my stories. A couple of them are too long but my Countess Zoe route in A Fantasy Dynasty might be about the right amount: https://chyoa.com/chapter/Countess-Zoe-of-the-County-of-Undrek-(updated-5-9-20).297796 even though updates have slowed to a crawl I do still intend to bring the story arc to a close. Eventually. In the medium term future

 

We are indeed still doing these.

Uh, Fantasy Dynasty! Expect to be harshly compared to Alexandra.

 

Not too proud of this one. There is only so many times you can roast the same author before it gets stale.

https://chyoa.com/chapter/Ocarina-of-Sour-Lime.1181408