Susan Storm's Secret Life

Discussion in 'Authors' Hangout' started by exxxidor456, Nov 22, 2016.

  1. exxxidor456

    exxxidor456 Experienced

    Hi all! I'm new here and have ported over some of my starting chapters for this addventure story from superstories.net.

    I'm happy for anyone to submit their own new chapters here, add new ideas for Sue's fantasy disguises, discuss ideas etc. :)
     
  2. Zekar

    Zekar Really Experienced

    Throwing out an idea here. She turns into Reed Richard's sexy secretary. Either she created this identity to keep him faithful to her(while also furfilling her secret fantasy) or she's stolen the identity of the real secretary in order to see if he's being faithful. But whatever you want if you decide to go with to.
     
  3. exxxidor456

    exxxidor456 Experienced

    Thanks for the suggestion! So you're saying it's Sue's secret fantasy to have Reed cheat on her? Interesting. I think Reed's probably too straight-laced to fall into that trap though!
     
  4. Zekar

    Zekar Really Experienced

    My best example would probably be an episode of Bewitched where Darren was feeling in sexy. Samantha then turned into a sexy woman to flirt with him to bring up his ego. She just meant to boost his ego, but almost ended up having an affair with her own husband.

    It could also be a home wrecker fantasy. It's not home wrecking if you are the wife. Granted the husband wouldn't know.

    As for Reed? Maybe an ending branch is him revealing he knew all along, but knew it was important to her. Then have one where he fakes that he always knew. ;)
     
  5. exxxidor456

    exxxidor456 Experienced

    Sounds like it could have legs! If you want to write up a chapter along the lines you suggest, please feel free! :)
     
  6. Nemeses

    Nemeses Virgin

    i actually rather enjoyed the Malice path, and was severely disappointed when it turned out there wasn't a whole lot of content on that path. all in all, you have the foundations for some pretty awesome storylines there
     
  7. exxxidor456

    exxxidor456 Experienced

    I'm glad you enjoyed that path! I like to write collaboratively and take turns knocking chapters back and forth with other writers, so if you'd like to add a chapter of your own, please feel free. Either that, or make suggestions for how the story could go forward.

    There was one additional chapter at the story's original home, at superstories.net, but that was added by a different author so I didn't feel it was right for me to port it over to here:

    http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=132617