Are the ideas I am imagining acceptable?

Discussion in 'Story Ideas' started by obsexo, Sep 11, 2022.

  1. obsexo

    obsexo Virgin

    Ive started a elf maid slave wich seems to be very expected.

    I thought above the lore to the alternate world I'm thinking.
    I thought basically to make the diferent elf cultures/populations based in real world cultures.
    As sex is the most affected by culture activity, diferent cultures would have diferent sexual fetishes, so they can serve as background for diferent fetishes and or scenarios.

    And I wonder if that will be accepted here.
    I enjoyed the novel Last&First Men, the part about the nationality stereotypes I found it funny and very informative about the english visions of other nations in the 30s, but many americnas advice to skip the first part of alternate history of the book beause they find those prejudices disgusting. Well, probably influenced because the author had a low opinion of americans, he even portrayed in his story americans linching blacks accused of sex assault to white women had become a national sport.

    I know that in any culture we can find gay, shy, risk seeking... and any kind of personality, but too seems true that certain traits are more common in certain cultures due to the cultural preferences, and too a bit for cetain personality genes being more prevalent in those cultures.


    Well, here is the description of the elf cultures, by the region they inhabit as elves are often forest peope in the ymths, I imagine them all in big forests. If this is approved, I'll post it as lore in the story :


    Cold elves: From the high latitudes. Their ears and pointy and short, due to thermal lose. Their female height is around 5,6 feet/1,7 metres, as a bigger size conserve better the heat.

    Scando - west russian taiga: There live the white elves. There feld the elves f Europe when their forests were progressively chopped by the humans. They are the closer ones to our culture. Their females are often submissive and used ti gebder roles. For most people they look cold and unwelcoming, it takes time to build a relation with them and let open their tender side.

    Syberian taiga: Yellow tanned with slanted eyes, asian looking. Their society feautres a lgtbq priesthood. Although their society isn't as lgtbq friendly a it sounds, they think that is something for shamans and thei couples only, nobles and commoners must be straight. Still, due to the charm of power and the forbidden, most elves here have a fetish for lgtbq sex in shaman, nun, or priest customs. The ones more warlike ae too in poligamy, due to war casualties.

    Canadian taiga: Tanned reddish people with a strong tradition of forest farming. Honestly I dont know about their sexuality, so I'm open to suggestions and enable peope to make their own fantasy.

    Chilean valdivian forest: Soft tanned. Centuries of fight with th spanish has made them a warlike proud people. Their females have strong personalities, they arent submissive, not good for soft boys, they want a strong male and like rough sex. Due to the war casualties, they are too fond in poligamy.


    From jungles: All females under 5 feet/1,5 metres, due to the jungles selective pressure to small sizes for beter move inside the dense vegetation. Their ears are pointy and long, so they hav great sense of hearing, wich helps them to hide be4 be found.

    Amazonia: Dark reddish skin. Their macho culture leads their females to a submissive behaviour, they have a strong tolerance to gender violence adn masochist sex. They have the higest risk and novelty seeking of all the populations. Men go to low intensity war or hunt tayasuidaes (pecaris, the amazonian boar, although smaller, are no joke) often just for the adrenalyn rush, females, they go on adultery, they are the most unloyal elves. So they need novelties for not fall in boredom and cheating.
    They are open to poligamy if in war.
    They are open too to homosexuality.
    Part of heir cosmic vision is that people are part of nature, so people and animals are the same. That has lead them to a kink wich won't be portrayed in this site: Bestiality. What it can be portrayed is their way to sublimate it in other cultures: They have a strong furry fetish. They love sex in costumes,and expressions like: "Im enjoying like a pig" "Scratch your kitten" "Roar, my jaguar"...

    Congo: They have afro look and soft brown skin. They are peaceful and welcoming to foreigners they love singing in community. I don't know wich their fetishes they are, feel ree to invent them.

    Tanzania: One of the less common type. Live in 2 well conservated miombo jungles. As the miombo is less dense than other jungles, this elves are as high as the cold ones and have black skin. The most similar to afroamericans. Not much is known about their culture, they survived being isolationists. Something known is that they have a strong fetish in bdsm and pain. They find scarifications very sex, their female wear whip scars with pride, they like scars and tattooos, so expect with them bdsm, whiping, and a lot of rough sex.

    Indonesia: Few of them remain, they have an afro look and black skin. Live in strong isolation in islands, canyons or deep inside jungles. The most misterious of all them, they have survived through stealth and a strong hostility to foreigners.

    New Guinea: Possibly the most abundant of all. Native austalian looking, some are blonde. Many diferent cultures, but a general trend is a deeply macho and mysoginistic culture, so expect them to be very submissive and tolerant to gender violence.
    Some sex habits found in diferent tribes:

    -A tribe were marriages are always of big age diference, the most common engagement for a mature male is to marry the daugther (or granddaughter, or grand-grandaughter) of the daughter of a beloved teacher or neighbour. So they have usually a early and later marriage in their life. So, their strongest fetishes are of daddy's girl and milf.
    -An homopatriarchal tribe, champions of misoginy. Their sex for pleasure is homosexual. Both sexes hate each other. Bonding activities* between sexes are the exception instead of the norm in this tribe.Their females often see the new culture after their enslavement a good change.
    -A tribe were in the wedding the bride makes a gangbang with the groom guests.
    -A gerontocratic poligamous tribe where only older males marry. Young males must be homosexual. Some chose risky sex with married women. Slaves from his tribe is very popular between dirty old men and gays.
    -A tribe were if you marry a woman and his mom is widow, you are expected to marry the mom too. You guess wich is their favourite threesome?


    * Bonding activities are activities for cohesion the couple. As elves most time dont practice sex due to their biologic cycle, they replace it with many diferent activities:
    Combing hair, body massages, bath together, dance, sing, mold pottery, watch movies hugging...
     
  2. obsexo

    obsexo Virgin

    Oh, another question, can I make the story diverge, and then the 2 divergences reunite in a same chapter or once a divergence is done, it must always lead to a diferent chapter?
     
  3. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Sounds to me like you just want to write race play lol

    Which is fair game as far as the site is concerned. There is some pretty hardcore stuff on here.

    As for the second question, there are no rules in regards to the layout of your story.

    As long as your story adheres to these rules here you are fine

    https://chyoa.com/chapter/Rules.560688


    What you want to do however, is proofread your stuff some more. There are a lot of typos in the text.
     
  4. Dissonant Soundtrack

    Dissonant Soundtrack Really Really Experienced

    To expand on the second question, you would use a link chapter to make the paths merge. It's a common setup, no worries on that score.
     
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  5. TheLowKing

    TheLowKing Really Really Experienced

    This is all legal and fine. I'm a little worried you're spreading yourself too thinly, though. I prefer focusing on just a handful of fetishes in any individual story, because in a huge sprawling story, it's hard for readers to find the particular things they're interested in.

    ...On the other hand, the top 10 is basically entirely composed of huge sprawling stories, so YMMV. :p

    Also, why bother making everyone elves if the races/ethnic groups/subspecies hew so closely to human races/ethnic groups?

    To expand on the expansion of the second question, to make a link chapter, create a new chapter as normal, then click on 'Link Chapter' in the right sidebar and enter the title of the chapter you want to link to there.
     
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  6. Elist

    Elist Experienced

    Meanwhile there's straight up race supremacy stories on this site lol.
     
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    Iam_DickMan Really Experienced CHYOA Backer

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  8. Iam_DickMan

    Iam_DickMan Really Experienced CHYOA Backer

    Yeah… those get real weird real fast. Usually avoid those with a ten foot pole.
     
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  9. Elist

    Elist Experienced

    Goes into the same quarantine zone as things like obesity, stench, scat, diaper... No offense to people who like it, I'm sorry I just can't stomach things like that. I wish there was a way to ignore stories so I don't have to see them pop up on my feed.
     
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