Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Gambio, Jan 24, 2021.

  1. Dissonant Soundtrack

    Dissonant Soundtrack Really Really Experienced

    What about a story where the original owner deleted their account? I have a branch of 12 Hours to Please that starts with chapter 3.

    Also, it's awful so there's a lot for the ladies to work with.
     
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  2. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    God damnit, I knew I shouldn't have mentioned the backlog XD

    I'm surprised myself you didn't submit Dustbin stories again.

    Yeah, I already made a couple exceptions for when a story is below 10 chapters but finished. Segment might be shorter though.

    Already done that as well. Hell, Marcie and Gina are from a story of which the author deleted his account.
     
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  3. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    I am... REALLY trying to finish Emily's Day 1 before submitting Dustbin again, but god damn is it taking forever... Ruby's day 1 was so simple and short, but Emily's is a sprawling mess... Like god damn... I doubt Marcie and Gina will end up encountering more than a tenth of the existing content for it even on multiple runs... It is a menace!
     
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  4. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    hahaha, I can appreciate the effort. 632 chapters, but only 33 chapters deep definitely speaks volumes
     
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  5. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Jesus... I never even noticed that. Well that definitely puts it in perspective a bit... XD

    Edit: and somehow... They will again miss every single pornographic/erotic chapter... especially the lesbian scenes of which there are now multiple.
     
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  6. Dissonant Soundtrack

    Dissonant Soundtrack Really Really Experienced

    Cool, I'll circle back in a few months when I'm eligible again.
     
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  7. Warden-Yarn15

    Warden-Yarn15 Really Really Experienced

    Page 42.

    We have found the secret to life, the universe, everything.
     
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  8. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru


    The first chapter sat on 69 likes for a very long time as well. Made me sad to see the number go.
     
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  9. Iam_DickMan

    Iam_DickMan Really Experienced CHYOA Backer

    Taking your advice I added link chapters to tie my shorter spurs back to the main story. Look at me learning new tricks.
     
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  10. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru


    Glad to hear it. I do think that portion of the segment was valid lol
     
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  11. Iam_DickMan

    Iam_DickMan Really Experienced CHYOA Backer

    And you said that the criticism wouldn’t be helpful. Ha, look at me now! I found the gold bar in the trash can.
     
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  12. Cuchuilain

    Cuchuilain Guest

    Ah. But what was the question?
     
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  13. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Officially requesting Bad Sex be added to the review queue - and for it to be open to Masochist Mode, after.
     
  14. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Oh no.
     
  15. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    If it makes you feel better, there's only one chapter with a character named Marcie mentioned.
     
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  16. AlexandraS90

    AlexandraS90 Really Experienced

    May have to put Just Another Day up for consideration once it reaches the chapter requirement...
     
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  17. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru


    Expect lots of bitching that you haven't done King Edward instead.
     
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  18. Iam_DickMan

    Iam_DickMan Really Experienced CHYOA Backer

    Guess who just hit twenty more chapters! Ding ding ding! It’s me! I’m the rascal.
     
  19. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    You still have to wait until the three month waiting period is over before submitting your story again ;P
     
  20. Iam_DickMan

    Iam_DickMan Really Experienced CHYOA Backer

    I’ll be back in 20 days.
     
    Last edited: Oct 12, 2022