Pokémon E&F

Hello, this thread is to help me better my story "Pokémon E&F", by increasing communications between myself and readers. I will try to notify you of future chapters and themes I have planned (as I usually draft a bunch at a time and publish them one by one) and maybe come up with some polls. I also hope to attract ideas, typo alerts, feedback, suggestions, and such from your end as well. You can also tell me what other customization options you would like me to add that haven't already. And to authors wanting to add chapters, be careful what ones you do add so they make sense and that some are conditional to what content path it is on (or you can avoid them entirely). Thank you for reading.

https://chyoa.com/chapter/Introduction.294495

 

Please notify me of any errors and the like as the current chapters have some that were carried over through copying and pasting, and I was not able to fix them all or every time. Also I probably won't be adding any chapters myself (feel free to add some, I'll still review them and most likely approve) as I wan't to currently finish up my other story, "Life of Jamie", and want to add to some other people's stories.

 

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It works for me, but this may be because it is still in review. If it still is after being approved, tell me and I'll redo it.

 

Introduction page, last paragraph, second line, I don't think 'yiu' is a word.

 

Also, I think you have the mother say, "Hello birthday boy!" despite the gender you pick. Also don't say I have short hair; it doesn't make sense if someone puts 'long' in the customize box. Lastly, in the mother's last quote in the paragraph when you get started (after choosing sex and stuff), she says, "Oh dear, on if your father.." which doesn't make any sense.

Sorry if that was a lot; I am actually enjoying it so far!

 

Okay, last thing for right now, I promise. You got any weird stuff you don't want in the story, because looking at this, I'm thinking incest, and poke-fucking of course, but it's mostly the incest I wanna ask about.

 

I'm not the OP but, at at glance, I'm not seeing a lot of indications of "poke-fucking", as you put it, if that means what I assume it to mean. The actual creatures themselves are sufficiently animal-like that it's possible such content would run against the site guidelines against bestiality. In any case the focus here seems to be about domination and enslavement of humans in the same manner as the creatures, with the 'mons' themselves being de-emphasized, at least when it comes to sexual content.

 

See, I was thinking about the same thing, so I clicked the 'Add a New Chapter' link to see if he mentions it there. Turns out he's a-okay with it. Like you said, it wouldn't be the focus, but he does make specific mention that, so long as the mon itself wasn't TOO animal-like, poke-fucking would be allowed.

 

I quite like your story, i would love to see where it goes.

 

Incest is allowed but I've made it an optional path as the unfinished business is deciding to capture your parent(s). As for the other, you and fyreant pretty much figured it out. I was very conflicted with it when creating it as it was born out of a desire to see one without such content as I find it weird (for my taste) and it's everywhere. They need to have an ability to filter out the stuff I don't want to see on those sites. Then again there are pokémon like machamp and such that are fairly human and pokémon are sentient creatures that allow themselves to serve under people as pets. But they also don't exactly pass the Harkness Test unless you allowed them to speak like meowth or slowking, or given people a translator. It's really up to the people.

 

Alright, I'll respect your tastes and keep the bulbasaur dicks out of the trainers' pussies while writing on your story, but, now that I have the cue, I'm totally gonna write that 'capture your mom' scenario. Just one thing, though; have you any rules regarding the rival? See, I was thinking after the player does or doesn't capture his/her mom, I'd give them the opportunity to capture their rival if they wished, but I'm not even sure their rival starts out in the same town as the player in the F version. Do both the player and rival start out on Oh Island, and are you okay with the player capturing the rival character?

 

'ight B. In both versions the rival(s) have already started his/her/their adventure in Kanto from Oh. In E you'll be avoiding him/her/them as you beat gym leaders (who I may or may not genderbend for the versions by making them someone else, a family member or an apprentice or an original character) who the rival will capture sometime afterward as each time you'll make them lose their immunity badges, and in F you'll eventually the rival(s) who captures other characters you didn't (npcs, trainers, side characters from the anime). With the pokemon situation, I think it might be best if they were humanized in some way (transformed, crazy people who think they are pokemon), like some sort of middle ground. I got the idea while playing "Con-Quest! Pokemon" on New Grounds. And if you do add chapters, I do appreciate it because it feels like a dick move to publish this only to work on my other stories until I've done what I wanted. I didn't want it sitting out here for that long, but the idea has been itching in my head for while and i wanted to write it down and get it out of the way. Also I didn't understand the hair thing. If it helps, you a can write whatever you want in the customizer, shoulder-length, big voluptuous, 9 in. long, etc.

 

pokemon are sentient so it would be hard to call fucking them Beastiality more xenophilia.

 

I've played "Con-Quest!" before. Couldn't get into the mechanics, but I dug the idea. I'm not too into anthro, I only prefer human or pokemon, one or the other (as weird as that sounds), so I doubt I'm gonna do any transformations. But for cosplayers? I think there's some merit there, provided there's some way to do it without coming off as forced. Also, I get what you mean about not wanting the story to just sit there; I usually come up with WAY more ideas than I know what to work with. Lastly, about the hair thing. Here's exactly what happened: While on the introduction page, I looked over to the customizer to see I could change what hair I have, so I decided to make it "long and hippie-like." After that, I chose which version I wanted to play, my gender, my orientation, and then I got to the big paragraph that describes my appearance. In the paragraph, it says I have "A head of short {hair}..." So when I read it, it said, "A head of short long hippie-like hair..." Which made no sense, since it said I had short, long hair.

 

Technically all animals are sentient. By your logic, it's only bestiality to fuck rocks.

 

Sorry, I didn't see hair length was one of the options. My bad!

 

ok let me clarify, they have near human intelligence in the show. They have their own language and can learn to speak human languages with great effort and when they do appear smarter than many of the human characters. They can consent and therefore do not count for bestiality but rather xenophillia.

 

Alright, I've added my perverted version of the pokédex and that keeps track of any human captured in the story. Just to be clear, this doesn't mean I'm back yet to dedicate time to the story solely for a period of time. I just had the idea and wanted to include an idea I had about humans "evolving" thanks to fan art online. On that, not every person should evolve and not every person should evolve the same way. Not every woman should get a bigger set of tits and ass and not every guy should muscles and a huge dong. I want there be a diversity of people in ethnicity and shapes (even though most of the characters from my stories have a huge rack and a bubble butt). So, when someone is captured in a chapter or shown to have been captured, try to give him or her a Sexdex entry and an evolution (if he or she should evolve) when he or she does in a later chapter down the line. Humans "evolve" through sexual experience and bimbofy which change his/her body and outfit. I'd like them to be just like pokédex entries with height, weight, personality, altnernate name (one could be similar to Evee, but not a cosplayer, and evolve into a multitude of different types of women and she'd be nicknamed "The Plain Jane"), etc. Also, if you do add an entry, try to add a link chapter upon capture or appearance to the entry and another back to the chapter. I hope I have enough drive and chapters lined up when I come back, I really want to see this story grow.

 

Not fully back yet but I'm going to put up some SexDex entrys and open up the cosplayers to everybody. The starters I have set up the whole idea for anybody who wishes to make more. I'd be glad to hear any feedback about how I've set them up so far. Message me with any suggestions for better names or ideas with this whole section of the story. I know it's just a little add on (that takes a hell of a lot of time to set up) but I like it and it creates a standard for writers so you don't have to come up with all of it yourself. The main problem I've had with this is the heights and weights because I want it to be reletive to the pokémon but I also want them to be realistic people and don't want them to seem underage. Anyway, message me with specific things and post more general stuff here so that others can weigh in. And don't worry, I'll be back to add the first leg of the journey after I'm done with what I've set up form my other story. I've already drafted out the titles of some and plan on taking it past the first or second badge.