Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Gambio, Jan 24, 2021.

  1. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    oh hey it's the Guts guy, sure, put you in the backlog

    They will bitch that you never asked for a follow up on the monster harem one though lol
     
  2. noodles22

    noodles22 Virgin

    Hahaha, well, I don't think there was a lot of stuff remaining on that story to comment. And seeing them bitch about stuff is really funny, so that's cool by me.
     
  3. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

  4. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    So, seeing the notification for the new chapter reminded me, I actually did finally finish Emily's Night One in Dustbin, so I guess I'd like to request a follow up, focused on Emily's branch now, if possible.
     
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  5. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Ugh, I should do more Masochist Mode reviews, but I've been hella busy lately.
     
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  6. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Same... Aside from Yulia I've fallen behind on writing almost all my stuff... Though part of that was an ongoing illness followed by depression spiral... WHICH I STILL WROTE YULIA THROUGH BECAUSE THAT'S HOW DEDICATED I AM TO KEEPING A SCHEDULE! but uh yeah have been struggling to write for a bit.
     
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  7. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Ah, that has been a while *g*, sure, time for that follow up



    Also since you are cleary not busy and all that, feel free to do my newest story

    https://chyoa.com/story/Slave-Tournament.49589

    for Masochist mode ;P
     
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  8. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    I'm working on getting back to doing Advanced Fantasy, maybe after. Though I have looked at it. Glad to see you writing something new, especially since I was not watching the Cat Girl Maids one... and you weren't updating Clumsy Ninja anymore.
     
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  9. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    I've got a pause scheduled for...thirteen chapters from now. So, maybe a week?
     
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  10. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Yeah, it annoys me that I let these stories sit unfinished. At least Sissy Slaves ended on a decent stopping point, but Kanami, it's a tricky one because the classic, start out as silly nonsense and then power creep happens is basically the big issue I'm having with it. I have written some stuff for it since last update but not enough to warrant a continuation.

    That said, Slave Tournament will get finished. I was working on this one pretty much ever since I finished Hard Candy and I have enough material that it's just a matter of polishing it.

    Excellent, ho ho ho
     
  11. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    That's good to hear, also don't like... take that as me criticizing you for not continuing Kanami yet.
     
  12. salam123

    salam123 Experienced

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  13. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

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    Gambio CHYOA Guru

  15. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Hey, you don't want us to request follow-ups to every story you review. After all, there are several branches of BAD SEX you haven't read yet.

    I do kind of wonder what kind of Orc that Marcie WOULD be able to see herself as. Maybe a brash warrior who was put in her place by an Orc Queen, then escapes only to be captured by the elves who subject their ancient enemy to all sorts of humiliations...before the Queen comes to reclaim her.
     
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  16. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru


    I mean they basically do that for Lois Lane anyways XD

    That was a comment from Gina, Marcie actually has very little issue self inserting in all kinds of scumbags XD
     
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  17. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

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  18. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

  19. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    So... Ruby's branch did not in fact get any updates since your last review... Ruby's day 1 was already finished at the time... Though I do intend to rewrite it actually at some point, I'm not satisfied with Ruby's branch. What I finished was the first day of Emily a different character, which is why I requested Emily's branch... But um... glad they found more of the available sex scenes that had existed in Ruby's branch XD
     
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  20. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    For some reason I had it in my head that Ruby was the big one while the other paths where updated more sporadically.

    But yeah, we are doing another one on it after the current segment