Trying to Decide My Next Project

Discussion in 'Story Ideas' started by pwizdelf, Mar 26, 2023.

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Any preference what story I do next?

  1. A) Marji is sent to mental health summer camp, where she makes a friend who forever changes her life

    26.3%
  2. B) Fauzia is a ghost-whispering rookie cop with a gift for cracking wise & casual sex preferences

    31.6%
  3. C) Chrissy caught her little brother jacking off into her panties and now it's pretty awkward

    31.6%
  4. D) Posley wakes up from a malfunctioning cryo storage capsule and is rescued by a salvage crew

    47.4%
  5. X) Hey girl maybe stop trying to sprawl into other shit instead of developing what you already have

    10.5%
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  1. pwizdelf

    pwizdelf Really Experienced CHYOA Backer

    Your post in the other thread about endings made me think of something interesting/paralyzing me with indecision (haha but also hnnn) relevant to this story particularly. I have chunks of narrative for the characters at different ages, with jumps of years in between. It occurred to me the other day that I didn't have it nailed down how exactly I wanted to structure things within the CHYOA framework as I understand it, to allow these time jumps where a new section of narrative picks up, but to be able to still go back and do more slice-of-life threads for prior ages for these characters, and have them funnel into the same timeline as "just more stuff that happened to them around that age." I admit I'm dragging my feet doing the next Fauzia chapter because it's the first small time jump for them and I don't want to get myself set up wrong structurally and then be hating life trying to make the shit coherent for the next two hundred thousand words.

    I'm so green here probably everybody already knows the answer to this. Is it linking? I just do branches off the earlier node and when I get to the "continue" part I just link it to the end node?

    OK. I think I just answered my own question. But I'll post this anyway just in case I didn't and this is some famous newbie pitfall or it's nothing and I'm overthinking it. :D
     
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  2. pwizdelf

    pwizdelf Really Experienced CHYOA Backer

    Your comment on my chapter earlier had me thinking, huh, what Banks book do I relate most strongly to and have the most interest in its characters and in emulating that vibe. Since they kinda run the gamut. I'm not sure Excession would work though for kindling the sexy times because I think I'd just want to write a whole book of nothing but ship minds hailing each other and talking shit. Assuming nobody's done that. I was trying to remember if I've read Inversions and that was a day ago and I still have no idea whether I actually did. Possibly I should reread the Culture books one of these days. I don't remember shit apart from names of GSVs and stuff. Zero Gravitas and the like.

    I'll do some chewing on Posley since there's so much interest. It'll probably be a while before I get developed because I haven't spent a lot of like, head time? in space settings compared with fantasy or regular world.

    Thanks for the stuff you've checked out btw! Feels awesome to hear the cool stuff people have said.
     
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  3. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

    I think you have it exactly.

    If you are sole author you have a great deal of freedom for how to organize and link sections of your story.

    I could imagine branches from the story intro page for "about", "characters", and then different stages/development periods of your characters' stories. From each stage you could have branches for different episodes within that stage/period, and then a sequence of chapters/pages for that episode.

    Link an end of episode to the period branch and to the next episode, once that starts.

    Or whatever makes sense to you.

    It's exciting to hear that you have a lot to work with already.

    Make choices that keep it fun for you!
     
  4. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

    Another commenter already called out the title of the book which I recalled as Banks doing a fanfic on himself: Inversions. The doctor and the general appear to be Culture members embedded in a medieval intrigue story.
     
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  5. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

    Oh wow your convention stories and your previously published work. <3 </3

    Conventions were mostly a life un-lived ("choose your own adventure") after I moved for college and fell in with the tree-hugging, maypole-dancing, candle-blessing pagan revivalists.
     
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  6. pwizdelf

    pwizdelf Really Experienced CHYOA Backer

    Preston, is that you?
     
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  7. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

    haha, not me (not a name I have ever used, or else I haven't seen that movie / series / graphic novel where Preston would answer to my bit of reminiscence).
     
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  8. Caravahfx

    Caravahfx Virgin

    Probably C if you can add a mom & another brother in to the mix too. Let's spice it up
     
  9. huginn

    huginn Really Experienced

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