Lilith's Fling with Cursed Items

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by LaudnaWrites, Jan 24, 2024.

  1. LaudnaWrites

    LaudnaWrites Guest

    I recently posted my first story to the site, Lilith's Fling with Cursed Items, set in a fantasy world where it has a big focus on transformation, reluctance and a cast of stereotypical adventurer-types. They're based on my stories of the same name that I posted to literotica with the added benefit that I can expand much more on the different transformative aspects.

    I'm a pretty strong writer but this is my first time posting to CHYOA, so I'd appreciate any and all feedback and welcome anyone adding to the story if they have an idea they'd like to explore. I plan on adding a lot more chapters in future using different magic items, but want to start slow.
     
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  2. chris_brown

    chris_brown Really Experienced

    One item I'd love to see you use,is a glass.or jade crystal penis or pussy-shaped sex toy for Lilith to "bless" before giving them to someone she deems worthy for such gifts ;)
     
  3. raziel83

    raziel83 Really Really Experienced

    Something like a cursed item that disintegrates all other clothing the user tries to wear is always funny.


    I'm just not sure if it should be jewelry or what. It should be something that itself looks embarrassing so that the victim would have preferred to keep it covered... Maybe cursed lingerie with open crotch?
     
  4. LaudnaWrites

    LaudnaWrites Guest

    Currently expandinh this story with more cursed magic items to choose from and more flexibility in setting up the story early on. Keen for anyone who's into TF to have a go and add some chapters or their own item if they want.