Mind and Body Control Ring discussion Thread

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by C_Que, Apr 13, 2024.

  1. C_Que

    C_Que Really Experienced

    Hello Choya readers and writers,

    since I recently reached the 1,000 likes mark with this story and I received a few comments. I thought it would be a good idea to open a thread in the forum. That makes communication a little easier. At least I think so. So to everyone who has an opinion on the story or wishes. You are welcome to send them in. I certainly won't be able to implement everything, but I am confident that we can implement one or two things.


    So to the story. It is not a new idea and there are countless stories of this kind both on Chyoa and on other sites.

    A god has created a ring that binds itself to a person. This person can then change people physically and mentally, which is a "normal" mind control story.
     
  2. TheLowKing

    TheLowKing Really Really Experienced

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