The Chronicles of Atlarcton

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Duskford, Mar 12, 2017.

  1. Duskford

    Duskford CHYOA Guru

    Hi, everyone! This is the discussion topic for my new story "The Chronicles of Atlarcton". It's my first fantasy-themed story on Chyoa, and I decided to use a world I've been building for a few years just for fun.

    I decided to use the approach of just introducing the mythology, and then let potential contributors write the story they want. You can use one of the characters I listed on the information page or maybe one you created, you decide. You can also choose to write the story of an entire family or even the whole continent, if you like. Of course, you are always welcome to branch existing threads as well. Have fun, the sky is the limit.

    Link: https://chyoa.com/story/The-Chronicles-of-Atlarcton.11385
     
    Last edited: Feb 18, 2018
  2. henrytemp

    henrytemp Really Experienced CHYOA Backer

    glad you tried this. not that I haven't enjoyed your multiple entries into the cabin-verse (I have) but looking forward to something completely different from you
     
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  3. Funatic

    Funatic Really Really Experienced

    HELLO!

    I am writing Lacos his story, just writting to let everybody know that i am present in this thread as well, so if you have any thoughts or discussions you want to have with me about this branch you can unload here or PM me (If you prefer that).
     
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  4. Duskford

    Duskford CHYOA Guru

    The story is going great so far! I'm enjoying to write the paths I started up until now, Riekan Lionwell and Zander, and I'm really loving to read about Gilthas, Lacos and Sylvia. I'm glad the world I came up with inspired you guys to write stories in it.
     
  5. Funatic

    Funatic Really Really Experienced

    Finally added my first erotic chapter to that as well. That took longer than expected...Had a slight block with these in the last time, turned out pretty well though. At least in my opinion.

    Also very happy with how active the story is currently, lots to read of other people speaking about other interesting parts of the world. Might do some crossmentions eventually, nothing major though. Should really read all of them, currently only following Zander with complet attention.
     
  6. Duskford

    Duskford CHYOA Guru

    I liked your chapter, Lacos and Reiline are a very entertaining couple to read about.

    Zander is my attempt at a more classic RPG approach with travels, fights and more characters, while Riekan's story, while having a lot of combats as well, it'll feature more political dealings than Zander's story. A fun fact about Zander, in my headcanon, he is Sarine's future husband.
     
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  7. DarkFriday1408

    DarkFriday1408 Experienced CHYOA Backer


    Just a question. Does Zander being Sarine's future husband, mean that he is the son of a noble or possibly the former Prince of Duskath, and that he was smuggled of the island and he just doesn't know that yet? Or in you're story line, will Sarine forgoe the throne?

    Good luck and happy writing.
     
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  8. Duskford

    Duskford CHYOA Guru

    It's very possible that Zander has an important backstory and just doesn't know it yet, his path is still a bit hazy to me, I've got Riekan's story more figured out. I will use Sarine differently on Riekan's and Zander's stories.
     
  9. Duskford

    Duskford CHYOA Guru

    Writing new threads for this story, so I'm inviting everyone to take a look at it and see if it interests you, either as a reader or a writer. There are lots of different ways the various branches can be taken, and you have room to create new ones if you want to. Hope everyone likes it!
     
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  10. bbc4lwg

    bbc4lwg Virgin

    duskford you are a credit to chyoa
     
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