DOOMED

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Zeebop, Aug 10, 2024.

  1. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Trying to get tonight's writing done, but I'm exhausted tonight. We'll see how it goes.
     

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  2. Impregmaniac

    Impregmaniac Really Experienced

    Is it weird that when I first read Mysterio and Mae, my first thoughts were of WWE and not Marvel?
     
  3. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    I have to admit, I'm not up on wrestling.
     

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  4. Impregmaniac

    Impregmaniac Really Experienced

    It's been forever and a day since I last watched pro-wrestling too, but flashes of my favorite matches are replaying in my brain.

    Off to Youtube we go!
     
  5. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    I am...distressed. I need to get de-stressed. Regular chapters will resume Friday.
     

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  6. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Implementing a Maximum Branch rule for DOOMED, just to try and keep things reasonable. The introduction chapter will max out at 10 branches, and subsidiary chapters will max out at 5 branches each.

    I can always go back and change that, but at the moment there are 319 chapters to be written, so it's probably for the best to cap new branches slightly.
     
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  7. exxxidor456

    exxxidor456 Experienced

    Sounds like a good plan. It's probably best to put a limit on the branches and not risk the story becoming too diffuse.

    But there's no such thing as too many stories about Sue Storm getting corrupted, so I'm glad you're giving yourself the option to go back and add new branches if and when they seem viable.
     
  8. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Rest assured, the branches will continue after Sue gets corrupted (chapter 20). Just debating whether or not to bump up the limit. We'll see how the response is.
     

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    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

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  10. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Usual caveat: a lot of the Porkum-corruption chapters are going to be a bit similar because they're all branching off the same storyline. However, I'll try to mix it up a bit to make the branches more distinct. Suggestions welcome.
     
  11. exxxidor456

    exxxidor456 Experienced

    Yay! I'm looking forward to a fully corrupted Sue having lots of perversely piggy fun with Porkum! :)
     
  12. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Did not get my writing done today because of...life. Will try to keep schedule, but I might need to skip a day. Just FYI.
     
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  13. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Sorry for ignoring the thread for a bit, just been busy with real life and trying to keep up the schedule. Porkum branches are still dominating, which I know doesn't thrill everyone, but that's democracy for you.
     
  14. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Traveling this weekend and will be out-of-state and with limited internet access for most of the coming week, so updates will be sporadic if at all. Good time to get caught up!
     
  15. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Back at a stable internet connection, will take me a little while to get back into the groove, but I hope to resume the normal posting schedule soon.
     
  16. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Still struggling to get back into the swing of things.
     
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  17. exxxidor456

    exxxidor456 Experienced

    I think you're doing fine!
     
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  18. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Everyone okay with the pacing?

    I think I've mentioned this before, but on my spreadsheet I have branches color-coded. When a chapter reaches the minimum like threshold to get a new chapter, it goes green. When the first chapter is written it goes yellow (then orange for 2nd, red for 3rd, purple for 4th, and blue for 5th, which is the max for branches so far). So far, I've been alternating between writing for the highest-rated green branch and the highest-rated non-green branch. Which is a bit slower for making branches longer, so I'm debating whether to mix it up a bit. Depends on what folks want - more branches or longer branches.
     
  19. exxxidor456

    exxxidor456 Experienced

    I think it's good that you pay attention to what folks want, but on the other hand - as a creator myself, I know I do my best work when I'm into it - so, I think you should balance what folks want with what you want. If you have an idea for a branch, that's what you should write.

    Personally, I like variety, so the more branches, the better!
     
  20. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Currently at 155 active branches; when it hits 175 I'm going to cap the options at 3 to slow the branch spread down a bit.
     
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