Here's a nice story with a fantastic concept, clearly inspired by SG Philosopher's toolkit. Sadly, imho, it is marred by the author's attitude towards criticism and discussion. I was blocked without any warning because the author didn't like my opinion. I, like MANY people here, love to read incest + mind control themes stories. It goes together like peanut butter and jam. The author prohibits incest content from their story, which is their right, but it's a very stupid decision imho. You are kind of missing the point of chyoa if you limit others contributors kinks/ideas and block their chapters. Especially with a great story with a concept that would greatly benefits from including incest. Contrary to what some of you may think, I am not salty but baffled by the censorship. I would advise people to go read the story because it is worth it, but maybe do not comment because the author is easily butthurt and is easy on the banhammer.
The creator literally has 3 rules for the story and No 2 is no incest. They're the creator and it's a moderated story so it's whatever they say goes. I've written a tonne of stories and it would be like someone trying to shoehorn something like Futas (just as an example) into any of them. It's not my thing. I like to keep an eye across the quality of the submissions I get so I go over every chapter submitted. I wouldn't want to read about Futas over and over so I would very probably reject them outright from the very beginning. And you are coming across as very salty too.
