Hah, glad Marcie finally gets some recognition for her BGM picks. This was one of the stories were we had too many songs to choose from, which is always nice Worse, much worse.
Anyone else think Gina dreams of herself as Jaws, aiming herself through the water like a sleek missile at a dangling pair of legs that belong to Marcie?
I ended up writing a reply chapter. I’ve never done a chapter on someone else’s story before. Do I just upload it and it send it to you for evaluation or something?
Goodness, it was over twice as long as my usual chapters lol. I think I may have went overkill with the reasoning to make it plausible in-universe…
Great, you just gave Gina a new fetish. If Marcie ends with any bite marks she's gonna sue you for damages. Yeah, just add it to the story like a regular chapter. I will have to approve it first, but the system is otherwise identical
Managed to just barely squeeze this one out in time https://chyoa.com/chapter/Lori,-a-woman-at-the-end-of-her-rope-,-by-wrynn.1683589
Very fun. Glad Gina had a fun time with this one and Marcie took the bait, can't wait to see her Halloween costume. Gina can get some enhanced milk to help her fit into it from Malcom at no charge.
I feel like I have to add a disclaimer that this all depends on an ongoing bet, which in turn depends on vyksin demanding a follow up. Also, you might have awakened a long suppressed fetish within Gina Which means Marcie will hate you even more.
"Pipe-weed Dreams" is 20 chapters deep, so submitting it for review and masochist mode. Little different from my previous stories. https://chyoa.com/story/Pipe-weed-Dreams.66501
It's been over 3 months, submitting The AI Knows for round 2. Take whichever branch you prefer. The girls may be more annoyed with the test option in a good way, more weird stuff happens. https://chyoa.com/chapter/Cerve-asks-you-about-the-test.1602075 If the girls take the test option you can skip from chapter 63 to 103 as it's The Wizard's Guild origin with some minor differences. https://chyoa.com/story/The-AI-Knows.63559
Good thinking telling them to skip that part, or you would have had to deal with one hell of a meltdown lol Put you in the backlog
They're of course perfectly within their rights to have a meltdown over it, just wanted to let you know where to skip to so you don't have to try and figure it out on your own. Looking forward to their opinion on the format of that section.
Remember when these reviews used to be about 4 pages long? Because I remember. https://chyoa.com/chapter/Harem-Hotel:-Mommy-Issues.1692697
