Pipe-weed Dreams

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Zeebop, Feb 2, 2025.

  1. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    If nothing else, this story gives me an excuse to do more brainstorming on setting, which is fun.
     
  2. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    It is very difficult to try to write a loving, therapeutic MFF threesome.
     
  3. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    So the plan at the moment is to do two parallel-path chapters for each main path chapter until we catch up, then we'll alternate one-for-one. I'm still trying to outline the back third or half of the story; individual chapters tend to have a life of their own, which doesn't always help move the plot along, at least not in the ways that matter. I know this is a pretty obscure story and destined to remain so, but I do want to finish it, flaws and all. Then maybe I'll post it on Literotica or something.
     
  4. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Cleaned up a few typos. I think the parallel-track construction is confusing to a lot of people. (It makes sense to me, but I'm insane.)