Pipe-weed Dreams

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  1. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Probably not my best big action scene, but hopefully it communicated chaos well enough.
     
  2. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Did a little housekeeping. Just a head's up that I'm traveling this weekend and all next week, so updates will probably be more sporadic. Don't like to leave people hanging on a cliffhanger, but I guarantee I've got an ending planned.
     
  3. Zeebop

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    ...and we're back. Had some time to brainstorm the ending a bit.
     
  4. Zeebop

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    This is probably a bit melodramatic for what started out as a slice-of-life Tolkienpunk sex fantasy, but I promise I'm going somewhere with this.
     
  5. Zeebop

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    Okay! That's the last of the dungeon delve chapters. Now...aftermath.
     
  6. Zeebop

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    Big revelations! Some of which you readers may have already guessed. Will be doing some tidying-up of loose ends and, I know I promise this, but more sex. I promise. Not sure how much longer I'll squeeze this out, but maybe hit the 40 chapter mark.
     
  7. Zeebop

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    Getting near the end! Sexytimes.
     
  8. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    I could end it there, but I think there should be just one more chapter as a coda and final wrap. Thoughts, anyone?
     
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  9. huginn

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    I think ending here would feel bit abrupt straight after sexy action.

    I like what you have done with Bob in this story.
     
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  10. Zeebop

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    I didn't want to reveal Bob too early.
     
  11. Zeebop

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    And that's a wrap! Final wordcount: 98,688. Which is a bit on the short side.
     
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  12. huginn

    huginn Really Experienced

    It was a nice story and long enough. Definitely fun to read.
     
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  13. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Toying with the idea of doing some other stories in the same setting. Not sequels, exactly, but Tolkienpunk Tales. Going to meditate on it and write some other things first, but who knows?
     
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  14. Zeebop

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    Outlining Tolkienpunk Tale #1. No rush to begin - next week is going to be murder at work, and it's not like Pipe-weed Dreams set the site on fire - but I've got what I think is a good idea and I want to get it right.
     
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  15. Zeebop

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    Started writing *Tolkienpunk Tale* #1. Going to take my time with this one. No rush.
     
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  16. Zeebop

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    This is still in the works, just finished chapter 3, but I sort of want to finish it, maybe polish a bit before I start posting.
     
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  17. Zeebop

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    Still dawdling on this one. Been exhausted lately, barely keeping up with DOOMED.
     
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  18. Zeebop

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    Still working on this one. I want to get all the chapters finished before I post them. Major problem right now is that it doesn't feel like there are enough sexytimes.
     
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    So, Tolkienpunk Tales has been launched. These are going to consist of several linear stories set in the same universe as "Pipe-weed Dreams," and the first of them is "Age of the Orc." While there are going to be some gratuitous sexy bits, these are also efforts to actually tell a complete story. First story is 14 chapters long, I'll post one chapter a day until it's complete.
     
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