My Roommate Is Possessed By A Brain Slug

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Zeebop, Jan 4, 2026.

  1. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    ...yes, let me fix that.
     
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  2. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Updated the lore dump. I should structure these better, but it's hard to find the time.
     
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  3. huginn

    huginn Really Experienced

    I'm enjoying developing communication between Mel and braislug hosts
     
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  4. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Updated lore dump. Any questions so far?
     
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  5. huginn

    huginn Really Experienced

    There have been two references to brainslug-host bonding stages, but I do not recall any mention even if the stages are outwardly distinguishable.
     
  6. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Yes. I don't want to do spoilers, but that's part of the thing going on with Soong, and we'll see some of that in future chapters.
     
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  7. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    If this story lasts until next year, I should start a second branch following Evil, Horny Mel on April 1st.
     
  8. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Might be interesting to retell this story from Rachel's perspective someday.
     
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  9. huginn

    huginn Really Experienced

    There is certainly plenty of elements for a story, especially if you were to show more of Jordan's past as well.
     
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  10. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    I know the last couple of chapters have been chatty, but we are going to get more sexytimes (and strange revelations) soonish.
     
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  11. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Traveling the next few days, but the good news is that Friday's chapter is already done, so there shouldn't be any disruption in posting.
     
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  12. huginn

    huginn Really Experienced

    Enjoy your trip
     
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  13. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Haven't updated the lore in a bit; been working on the outline for coming chapters. There's going to be a little more body horror and some more aliens are going to show up. Mysteries revealed, yadda yadda.
     
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  14. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    People asked privately: "I got the impression you were planning for a miscarriage story." and "I do not want Rache to get slugged by the bud slug."

    Neither of those are in the outline. Weird shit is coming up, but not those specific things. Be at ease.
     
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  15. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    I was on the fence about the name, but I tried out a couple of alternatives, and they all read too D&D-ish. So Ghola it is! And we may see more of BÊibhinn in the future.
     
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  16. huginn

    huginn Really Experienced

    Anastasia's thesis being referred as unpublished draft feels like foreshadowing something. I don't quite know whether it is ominous or good, but something.