Thrust...

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by 2p1k3, Feb 7, 2015.

  1. 2p1k3

    2p1k3 Experienced

    [Thrust…]:)

    The story as it has been written seems to be primarily from the son's point of view. There are two sisters, mother, and father initially living in a shelter. I estemate half the threads cover incest, and all threads 'start' with incest at some point as the protagonist lives. Other characters, outside the family, are created with continuing drama both coitus and otherwise.

    Though that gives me a question about any 'extended' family members and if it is possible to meet them.

    This is one of the stories I was following even before ChYOA. I like the quality, variety, and amount of content that it has and continues to be added. I think my favorite is the one with Alexandra and Luxandra, but that may be obvious to anyone reading that.:cool:

    [Unfamiliar Country]

    Tallywhacker wrote a comment :) about the amount of time I portrayed in this post. I responded but already hit enter before I thought creating this post may be more effective and contribute to the story more. {as I see a lack of a thread for 'Thrust' in this section of the forums}

    Yet another wish to be able to edit/delete comments. :oops:

    I was under the impression they had been in the shelter for over a decade or more. Thinking back I can see his point of view. However, maybe it is a stretch to see a couple months of living in a shelter to breaking Jerry's mind to the point he rapes a family member. I believe group isolation fails to work that fast. Solo isolation maybe but that fails to be the story.o_O

    Voidhawk2, please feel free to delete that post if it fails to fit the existing story.:D
     
    Last edited: Feb 7, 2015
  2. Torg

    Torg Really Experienced

    I've always thought the people had been in the shelter for a matter of weeks. They can come out because the enemy used neutron bombs, which leave no long-lasting radiation.
     
  3. jonray

    jonray Experienced

    I believe what happened was a type of "Neutron Bomb"

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Neutron_bomb

    http://www.fact-index.com/n/ne/neutron_bomb_1.html
    A neutron bomb is a type of nuclear weapon specifically designed not to produce a massive explosion and significant infrastructure damage, but rather to completely irradiate an area with neutron radiation, killing all living things while leaving the infrastructure relatively intact. Though a neutron bomb does cause infrastructure damage and some long term radiation (it is still a nuclear weapon after all), they are specifically designed so that ~48 hours after the device is detonated, friendly troops can move into an area and utilize the infrastructure without fear of radiation. Thus, neutron bombs are generally seen more as a tactical nuclear weapon than a strategic one. Due to this focus on tactical use, neutron bombs comprise some of the smallest nuclear weapons ever built (though the American bazooka-launched Davy Crockett warhead is not, as is sometimes claimed, a neutron bomb device -- it employs a standard fission warhead).
     
  4. reader230

    reader230 Virgin

    Definitely a great story, I agree Alexandra and Luxandra are a pretty hot addition. Glad to see more threads being posted on them. Though, I have always had a thing for the mother in the story. Something about the setting and her characteristics make her a really hot character for me.
     
  5. Stormrunner

    Stormrunner Virgin

    Yeah, I too have hots for the mother character, hope more threads featuring her would appear in the future. Btw the story is an amazing piece of work.
     
    Last edited: Jun 24, 2015