Any feedback on any of my stories

Hi

I've been writing for a while but didn't use the forum too much, and figured I'd change that.

So with that I've always wondered what people though about my stories, I get the odd comment, but was wondering if a post here might be a better place to see if people like what I do, and what they do or don't like, and then try and see what I can do to improve my writing.

 

A link to your author page: https://chyoa.com/user/Genericc616

 

Oh yeah, that probably would of been a helpful thing to add.

Thanks Zingerber