So, alternate reality time: There is a real place, like Toontown in Who Framed Roger Rabit, where all the Disney princesses live: but Disney has made a huge mistake: namely Disney princess #11... Leia Organa. Simply put, Leia's not the kind of princess the House of Mouse expects. She's firey, aggressive, and happens to be a fucking JEDI. Soon enough Leia is organizing the others into a rebel army, and the history of the animated world will never be the same... (What do people think?)
Your story is based on a dead persons fictional character revolting against Disney. Her mixed with Elsa could be a good starting block for you.
It would be fine, funny even: except for two things. 1: The green acid on his penis: OUCH! 2: The Alt Color word "HELP!" which displays quite clearly that she's raping him...
She just has green sexy juices. If it was acid, the Alien acid is fairly immediate in its effects, we'd know. He's just a little scared. I would be too. He'll be fine, I promise. The 'Help' is the funniest part!
MY EYES ARE BURNING! It reminds me of Alien, but sexy-ish. For those with dark devious minds yes Help is the funniest part of the picture. However I agree with Nemo it clearly represents rape. The green juices I will not comment on.
