Reluctant Fuck

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by JimJoeBob, Jan 2, 2018.

  1. JimJoeBob

    JimJoeBob Experienced

    Welcome to the forum page forum story, Reluctant Fuck. Here you can see updates on the where the story will be going and where anyone can post ideas, thoughts, or anything else they have to say about the story. Thank you for reading my story and I hope that you enjoy my Life of Jamie spin-off (despite the lack of actual character development prior to the release).

    Link to story: https://chyoa.com/story/Reluctant-Fuck.12829
     
  2. SeriousBrainDamage

    SeriousBrainDamage Really Really Experienced

    Read a couple of chapters.
    I like the idea but i have two issues with the story.

    Name feels too didascalic for my tastes, and the girl seems way too 'carefree' to be actually reluctant, if you know what i mean.
     
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  3. JimJoeBob

    JimJoeBob Experienced

    Yeah, I never really could find the word or words to get what I mean. I came up with her and the story after thinking about particular characters I'd been seeing. The idea is that she is a girl who everyone wants to fuck, but she doesn't want to fuck everybody unless she feels she has to thanks to the situation. The motto I think of for them is, "Not again..." or "Let's get this over with." If you are someone else has a better name that I like, I'd change it. Or if there is an actual name for characters like that then maybe I could come up with something better.