https://chyoa.com/story/The-Definition-of-Naive.12561 I've written a few stories already, but due to this story being a more creative one as opposed to basing it off of an anime or a comic book character, I've elected to post this hear to hear any feedback, comments, concerns, ect. I know my writing isn't the best, I can certainly improve on my detailing, but nevertheless, I'd love to hear anything about this particular story. It's very niche, in my opinion, certainly more focused on a single fetish that I enjoy and don't see a lot of porn of. But I figured I can write what I like. So, discuss!.....*pulls up a chair, takes out some popcorn and start munching on it, waiting patiently*....this could take a while.
so is the fetish naive girls? Thoughts, you could drop a thread for naive guys just in case any cougars out there want to pick that up. I like this fetish myself, particularly tricking naive girls into getting pregnant, depending on the mood then ditching them before they figure out what is going on. You see this a lot combined with incest (daddy/daughter) tropes and teacher/student stories. It would be interesting to see you go in other ways with it.
Hmm, that's an interesting idea, though I probably wouldn't write it myself, which is why I'd like other people to contribute. Having the guy as the naive one being taken advantage of...I could certainly start that chapter thread, but I doubt I'd continue it, I'd lose focus quickly. As for the daddy or teacher, I'll definitely look into that. I was gonna save this for a little while down the road, but I was thinking of eventually starting a chapter thread of a man who manages to find and sneak into Haven, have that be more on the Free Use side of things. That can easily turn into a teacher thread like you suggested.
I've added several branches to this story (which I intend to continue), and would be interested in any feedback on them: https://chyoa.com/chapter/Throw-Alex-a-bone.389279 https://chyoa.com/chapter/Meets-a-random-woman.395669 https://chyoa.com/chapter/No-Pants-Train-Ride-Day.407088
