Hi all, I'm new here just found this site off of Reddit. Started my first story and few chapters in. Still trying to figure out where it will go and finding my writing style. I'm doing all my writing on my phone, so will be keeping the chapters short. https://chyoa.com/story/The-move-back-home.11107 Let me know what you think or any tips or feedback is welcome. Also any ideas of where it should go, please feel to comment or add your own chapter
This could have been so much more: describe the scene, have the conversations! What you have right now feels more like an outline than an actual story.
