Hey everyone, I'm new to the forums and to writing on Chyoa, I figured I'd introduce myself and hopefully start communicating with other people. So I've been writing for a couple of days, and been really encouraged by everyone coming in and giving it a like and a bookmark, also especially chuffed by someone actually writing a chapter for my story (if you see this, you're a awesome person Wicker). https://chyoa.com/story/The-Power-of-the-Mind.10909 So my story is called Power of the Mind, a semi mind-control with a slash of fantasy stuff, although the latter doesn't really come into it much, at least not that I've planned for. So far I'm 8 chapters deep. So what I'm hoping for from this is some story feedback and tips about how I can be a better writer. I'm not so much focusing on writing sex scenes at the moment than I am actually trying to write a story that coincidentally has sex scenes in, I'm a fan of world building and the like. So, hopefully I'll hear from anyone passing by who clicks on this thread out of interest (or boredom).
