http://chyoa.com/story/lara-croft/cover So this was my first story on the site and I really enjoyed writing it but I didn't come into it with much of a plan, the threads sort of go all over the place. My original thoughts were to make it parallel the latest reboot for Tomb Raider, where there'd be a central storyline that basically followed the games plot and then write all the threads where things could have gone... differently. Of course it was my first story so things didn't go quite according to plan and as it stands the plot has sort of gone out the window. Lately I've been wanting to return to writing about Tomb Raider but I think it might be preferable to start a new story along the same lines as the first but with a more coherent plan. I'm also curious what people think of the transformation/psychological parts of the story. They were a little out there but I really liked writing them. Mind control/influencing and transformation are fun, especially for someone as "in control" as Lara Croft. Anyway, I'd appreciate any feedback the community has to offer regarding the story and whether I should start anew.
The aspect I LIKE about Lara is that she's a badass bitch who doesn't take any shit, so forgive me if I give this one a pass.
