So, I've started writing my first own interactive story on Chyoa and I wondered what people think so far. I do have somewhat of an idea as to where it'll go, pulling in pieces here and there from other stuff I've written both publically elsewhere and privately, but am also just making it up as I go. It's not all that long yet, but any comments on anything from theme, or writing style, to grammar would be appreciated. http://chyoa.com/story/chaos-theory/cover
Not a big fan of infidelity and DEFINITELY didn't like that choosing to stay and work made no difference.
Pro-pregnancy Not my type of work, but from what I have seen you have potential. Write more and you will continue to improve.
"For every baby, a happy home", that's my stance: do you disagree? This too is true, try writing in other genres if you don't already: to quote Lazarus Long, " Specialization is for INSECTS!"
So, what you're saying is, you are indifferent to the quality of life experienced by children? Am I getting that right? I apologize, everyone appears to be misinterpreting what I say today. This comment was not directed at you mtM, but rather at the OP.
Seriously? What has to do with the argument? It's about sexual fetishes, not social or moral views on family and relationships.
Unlike you SBD, I don't feel that one's fantasies and fetishes can exist in some kind of emotional/sociological/political vacuum chamber. Yes, I have a pregnancy fetish. Do you know what happens at the end of a pregnancy? One or more babies, that's what! And babies grow up, becoming children, then teens, and then adults. If I'm going to be in favor of pregnancy, because I find it hot, I, therefore, have to also be in favor of those children being able to grow up healthy and sane.
This post was necroed, so i suppose the OP won't mind.. I still fail to see how writing is harming anyone, yet i don't try to force my ideas on you.
This is starting to get really stupid.. Have you not any words that are yours that you have always to borrow others?
Any how ignoring the constant banter (de ja vu) Does any one have any comments for dirtytyke story http://chyoa.com/story/chaos-theory/cover ?
I tend to find that others have said what I would like to say already, and with both more eloquence and brevity than I would be able to manage. "Reinvented wheels are often Square." ~ Henry Spencer However, mtM is quite right, we're completely off topic. I wanted to continue this convo in a private chat, but it seems you don't allow that sort of thing...
I feel like a real idiot for trying to wage this (evidently) useless battle and earn such symphatetic comments.. Anyhow he original post is 3 years old, do you really think he sill cares? And what it would be, in this specific case? Ok, let's all just stop right there. Stop inventing, writing, thinking.. it's all already been done.. I have no desire to chat privately with you, the more you write, the less i like you. But this is not personal, on the contrary, and precisely for that reason, even i acknowledge a violation of others space (this thread), this is the only place this discussion have any reason to exist. You're childish, preachy and self-righteous. I don't like how you threat people that like things you find unhetic or unmoral. I wold be glad if you would be more polite and stick to non political arguments, but i know that won't happen. I was under the impression that this forum and its community were more mature than that, but it turns out i was wrong, seeing how other users reacted to our 'squabble'. Hence, i think i'll refrain from now on to use this forum. I'll stick to use the main site, at least untill i will be allowed to.
I am mature, mature enough to recognize the "butterfly effect", (and isn't talking about that in this thread of all places kind of ironic?), of fetishizing non-consensual sexual contact. Words have power SBD, they are the most primal building blocks of conscious thought, and if they are abused they can do immense, in fact incalculable, harm. Consider for a moment: what you fear, censorship; is and always has been based on the knowledge that what I have just said is true. Governments do not try to censor their own propaganda, they try to censor the TRUTH. And what are you so opposed to? If words have no power, if they can do no damage, my telling someone that rape stories are crap poses no danger, does it? But, if, as we both well know, they do have power, the power to shape, nay define, how we perceive the world: suddenly my calling attention to the fact that mind control stories are rape is a threat to your perception of this as all being harmless fun...
