Truth or Dare with the Guys

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by BartyTrinky, Mar 2, 2018.

  1. BartyTrinky

    BartyTrinky Virgin

    First of all, huge thanks to Friedman for the incredible honor of being the story of the week. It's been so much fun to write and get everyone's feedback on this adventure into my first actual piece of writing, and I know it's such a small thing, but it made my day to see my story over on the sidebar.

    For overall feedback - where should I be expanding the story? I created different story arcs, many outside what you'd expect out of the title, just to explore what a bi-curious guy could experience in the right environment.

    Mainly looking for feedback on that, but happy to talk through anything else.
     
  2. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    The story theme is not one I'm interested in (Sorry, straight...) but I would like to congratulate you on gaining SotW!
     
  3. BartyTrinky

    BartyTrinky Virgin

    Thanks, Nemo!