Seducing Your Sister

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by reader230, Apr 30, 2015.

  1. reader230

    reader230 Virgin

    Would like to thank all the authors who added threads to my story "Seducing your Sister". Couldn't have done it without you all.

    I would love to hear what you all think about it. I plan to go through some of my older threads and spice them up a bit. Also love to hear any suggestions about new characters or the direction of the plot.
     
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  2. Backdoorman

    Backdoorman Virgin

    Hello Reader230 I wanted to thank you for approving my threads to your story. I was surprised really cause i kinda thought my addition to the story was kinda weak, this was the first time I ever tried writing or contributing to a story but I might add a few down the road, your direction with this story is incredible and hot, I like how unpredictable it has been and how you and the others always bring something new to the table, hope your passion for it doesn't stop anytime soon.
     
  3. reader230

    reader230 Virgin

    Thanks for the feedback, I have no problem approving threads that show promise. I feel like your submissions were pretty good. With your permission may I add some imagery and details to your threads?
     
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  4. Backdoorman

    Backdoorman Virgin

    First off thank you for asking and secondly, yes I would be honored if you wanted to spice up my thread, look forward to seeing it.
     
  5. Hvast

    Hvast Really Really Experienced

    It is your write to edit threads :)

    I grant you permission to improve my contribution in any way you want. Hope to see this story growing because it differentiates from usual lame and boring incest stories
     
  6. Backdoorman

    Backdoorman Virgin

    True he didn't have to ask but it was cool that he did, your threads are pretty good as well Hvast
     
  7. reader230

    reader230 Virgin

    I think its the polite thing to do to ask. I wanted to make a story that was open ended and had lots of options. I see too many incest stories that dont have a variety of choice. With help from writers like you two it is becoming a reality.
     
  8. Backdoorman

    Backdoorman Virgin

    Well that is awesome and you have done a great job with story, honestly I am just glad to be working with talented people like you two and by all means, if you feel you can improve my threads in anyway, please have at it, I know when your done, it will be even better. I am also open to feedback so if you guys or anyone else wanna chime in please do so.
     
    Last edited: Apr 30, 2015
  9. Hvast

    Hvast Really Really Experienced

    I want to thank reader230 for high quality editing of his story. (And bump the thread to get some feedback)
     
  10. Hvast

    Hvast Really Really Experienced

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  11. Kathryn89

    Kathryn89 Virgin

    I love it and I haven't even finished reading every path. I might add to it but I think I'll help build your other story first.