I'm a new writer and this is my first story so I thought that it'd be good to put a topic here to get some feedback. I'm open to advice, suggestions, criticisms or whatever. I generally just want to try and write something people wanna read and maybe even add to. I've already had a few threads added by the very talented WickedMage and I'm looking forward to more of that and to other people's ideas. So here's a link to the story. I hope people enjoy it and, like I said, please feel free to let me know what you think. http://chyoa.com/story/a-smuggler-s-life-for-me/cover
Hey there! Love your story so far, especially the threads with Evie and the Chlorophyte. I've thought of a few ideas for chapters myself, but I'm currently lacking the enthusiasm to write much. Hopefully that'll change and I'll be able to contribute shortly.
Thanks very much for reading and for your kind words! I really appreciate the feedback! I'm gonna try my best to keep things going with all the threads a little at a time, but I'll admit to being partial towards the Chlorophyte thread a bit. I'm gonna get to more of her very soon (including giving her a name, probably). Thanks again and I hope that you do find some enthusiasm for writing to contribute to the story. I'll be looking forward to it!
I saw that and I've already approved the thread! Very nice work, by the way! I enjoyed every bit of it and I'm looking forward to seeing where that thread can go. I also love the Empire as an organization and I'll be sure to add them to my list of established information about the universe as soon as I can!
Thanks! I've thought of a few places this thread can go. I've got some erotic and exciting things planned, and a nice subversion/riff on one of my favourite Handsome Rogue tropes. But first, a Shyamalan twist...
Awesome! Can't wait for all of that. Though I only ask that the Shyamalan twist does not involve trees trying to kill humanity or somebody being dead the whole time. I will accept water vulnerable aliens though because, y'know, that could happen. Also, I've added the empire to a list of known organizations in the universe in the setting information for new writers. As they're your creation, if you wouldn't mind letting me know if I described them accurately enough the next time you add a thread and the info comes up, I'd really appreciate it.
