Well, this is my second story here on CHYOO so, again, I thought it would be good to put a thread up here to gather people's opinions on things. This story is a bit more serious in tone than my other, but I still quite like it. Still, as always, I am open to any advice, criticism, suggestion or feedback in general from anybody who would like to give it. Here's a link to the story. I hope that the people that read it enjoy it and maybe even find themselves inspired to add a thread of their own. Here's hoping, right? http://chyoa.com/story/memoirs-of-a-minion/cover
Really impressive story you have got there. As I gamer I have wondered how the NPC's would react to the hero character if they had actual intelligence. Waiting to see more, will try to add threads if you are ok with it.
I'm fine with anybody adding threads! I welcome it, actually. I haven't been able to write anything recently myself because work is a bitch, but I plan to add more as soon as I have the chance. But, until then, I'd love to see anybody else's take on things.
I never mind when somebody wants to add to the story! I'm very much enjoying what you've added so far, as I've enjoyed all the additions to the story so far. Looking forward to more!
Gonna be adding more to my additions to the story, just wondering if I should offer a 3rd successful choice to the "Plan of Attack?" question that would go to its own sort of storyline. It would be interesting, nonetheless.
I think that could be pretty interesting, actually. I tend to go with one or two bad ends and then one successful because I don't wanna overload myself with writing too many paths, but, if you think you can handle doing that, you should definitely go for it. I think it'll be good to see the different ways the story could branch. I've been thinking about starting another story that would be a prequel of sorts to this one that would explore that sort of branching, actually, so it'd be cool to see how that goes for somebody else, yeah?
Just since it is along this line, I read a mamga recently called RE: Monster, something along those lines, and it is about a guy who dies and is reborn in a fantasy world as a goblin and there is evolution and skills and its really good so far. You guys should check it out
I've read that one. It's really good. If you like that, you should read Tensei Shitara Slime Datta Ken. Same basic premise except the guy gets reincarnated as a majorly powered up slime. I've liked it so far.
