Reviving A Fetish Story Called "The Backpack" Need Fetish Suggestions

Discussion in 'Authors' Hangout' started by Blackhand, Jan 24, 2015.

  1. Blackhand

    Blackhand Virgin

    So I decided to bring back an old story idea called the backpack. The reason why is that it's a pretty fantastic open prompt that lets you start stories about any number of topics. So One of my projects has been to fill it out with more kinks. What I'm looking for is suggestions about specific fetishes that you would like to see added to it. I have quite a number planned, but even my kinkyness is no match for the vast force of all of your perversions combined. Help me out, guys.
     
  2. ddf_21s

    ddf_21s Virgin

    Maybe female hormones (for gender switching therapy) or diary of a slut.
     
  3. Patzo

    Patzo Really Experienced

    How about this: inside the backpack is an old school cassette or CD player. When you listen to it, a womans voice is telling you to masturbate in various public places around town without getting caught, or maybe going even farther. Itd cover both exhibitionism/risky public sex and JOI/instruction play in general.
     
  4. Squelchapron

    Squelchapron Virgin

    Free use is my personal favorite kink; it's like male-dominant mind control, only for the entire world at once and without any actual mind control.
     
  5. Blackhand

    Blackhand Virgin

    @Patzo

    That doesn't sound bad at all, but I'm a male dom primary writer so I'd probably not do it justice. If you don't find your own erotic writing very erotic it won't turn out so well. If someone reading that wants to try it, I'd love to see someone do something like that.

    @Squelchapron

    How would integrate that into the story?
     
  6. Squelchapron

    Squelchapron Virgin

    Well, if you're feeling classical it could be a standard-issue mind control totem, like a ring or an amulet. If you're in a sci-fi mood, opt for a can of nanobots or the chemical formula for a new pheromone. Or maybe you'd prefer something new, like a holy book that makes anything written inside of it a social norm/law of the universe/whatever you like.
     
  7. Patzo

    Patzo Really Experienced

    Totally understandable, it is sort of a broad premise compared to other fetishes. I'll whip something up myself if no one else gets to it.

    In the right context, you may not even have to go supernatural. You could fill the backpack with a map to a village, campground, ranch complex, etc. outside town. When the protagonist arrives, they find that the place has been made up to look like a normal town where everyone practices fair use, either as a permanent collective or for some kind of event a la Burning Man or the Renaissance Faire.
     
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  8. Squelchapron

    Squelchapron Virgin

    Good point! Not sure why I didn't think of that.
     
  9. Peri2g

    Peri2g Experienced

    Hmm... Well, I don't know if the suggestions I'd have to make would be what you're looking for. I'm much more into the fantastic, or even absurd, sort of fetishes. but I may as well post some of my ideas.

    One that I've always enjoyed is the draining of, or stealing of sexual characteristics. A 10/10 milf becoming a comely house wife, or an athletic and masculine man being drained away to a whimpering trap, only to have someone else gain those characteristics. Who knows who put what in that backpack, right? Someone may have set a trap.

    Forced tattooing is another one of my favorites. Perhaps it starts off as a fake tattoo, or even a pinprick of ink, but throughout the process of the story, and perhaps even coinciding with the corruption of the victim, the tattoo will grow, change, and become more illicit.

    Living sex toys are always fun, and can be funny if written well. Shibari ropes that like to wrap themselves up and around a victim are a delight to write, and even more so if the ropes decide they want to readjust when the victim is trying to concentrate, make a good impression, or otherwise maintain their composure.

    Symbiotes are fun as well. For ladies, a worm that growing from them, giving them the appearance of a prehensile dick that shares its sensations with its host is fun. For men, the same could be the case for internally massaging the prostate, or planting itself like a womb within a new or existing hole in the flesh.

    I've had a short story idea I've played around with of a dom that is actually just clothing. In this particular case, a suit and tie that exists only to instruct its victim on proper slave etiquette.

    I like to call the next idea "Or are you just happy to see me?" Basically it'd fall under the realm of a curse, but it's the idea of some other physical change happening when the victim becomes aroused. Perhaps their blush is a different color, or their eyes change color. Maybe their body inflates, or deflates, or otherwise exaggerates their sexual characteristics. Maybe they lactate, maybe they start to mewl like a kitten. I don't know, it's open ended. I just like it when I see it.

    Let me know if you'd like any more ideas in this vein.

    I'm new to this community so I don't know if these ideas are quite what you're looking for. Many of the stories I've read are a bit more grounded in reality, or at least very limited in the magical elements.
     
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  10. Patzo

    Patzo Really Experienced

    This sounds like it could be worked into X-Change, about pills that will change your anatomy to the opposite sex, since the story allows for pills that can change you into a specific person.

    That is a fascinating idea and I'd love to read that. I dig the idea of the invisible master, how you're being dominated in public but no one else can tell, the way a suit is a status symbol yet it uses that perception against you.

    I'm not the story's editor, so I can't tell you what's within bounds or not. Your suggestions are all plenty interesting, though, and they seem workable if you say the city's actually on a space station and this stuff works by nanomachines etc.